Moka Only ft Madchild 'Once Again' (DJ Excellence remix)

[DJ Excellence]

I made this today.

 

[Dusty B]

I like the drum pattern but I think it could knock a bit more. Hook sounds a bit off to me (are the vocals in a different key than the beat?). I would have liked to hear just the instrumental more tbh, but overall cool work, can hear a lot of Premo influence for sure.

 

[DJ Excellence]

Thanks! The beat and vocals are in the same key. RnB/Pop just isn't my forte. ¯\(°_o)/¯

 

[iDeaLoGiK]

Yeah theres something definitely off in this one. Makes Moka sound like he sings as bad as I do, which I know isn't true. As for the beat, its pretty repetitive. Not a lot of variation other than drops. I like what you have for it, but over the length of the entire thing it definitely is missing something to catch the ear again. For a song like this I'd say it would definitely need different sections between the rapping and the singing that plays to the strengths of them. In all fairness though unless the off key issue is fixed adding anything to it is pointless.