Sound complete or missing something?

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

Triumph

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[Earsblower]

Not bad ! But it's a bit too repetitive and too jampack to my liking. The first strings(I think it's strings? The 2 notes that goes back and forth) are too loud and again, way too repetitive. Keep going !

 

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

Not bad ! But it's a bit too repetitive and too jampack to my liking. The first strings(I think it's strings? The 2 notes that goes back and forth) are too loud and again, way too repetitive. Keep going !

Thanks for your honest feedback... Im fix it up n repost.

 

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

Changed it up so it doesnt sound too repetitive.. Let me know what you think

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