@SJAMBOK BEATS - I like the lyrical and floaty nature of the piano to open. I do like the vocal sample too, but I think it doesn't blend nicely with the piano. In fact, I think it's entirely out of key, and it's made more noticeable by you putting the echo on the most out of key part of it. I think the miss here is that the piano/plucks are in a melodic minor scale (sharp 7 going up, and natural 7 descending) and the vocals have are in a blues scale (flat 5) which leads to some clashing. I agree with
@2GooD Productions - that kick is bit to over-blown. Some cool ideas in here though. That piano line, and the counter are really nice!
@thekoolkrush - another dope sample selection! I think you ran into similar issues, key wise, by picking out the passing notes of the sample rather than the fundamental notes in the key of the sample source. Sounds like there's a phaser or heavy chorus laid over the entire chorus. Not sure if you did that to beef up the sound, but I think it takes away from the overall sound. Nice drums, mix could be a bit cleaner, but I did enjoy this.