Showcase - May 11-17, 2020

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Flintoast

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That sounds really nice. Solid idea.
Kick sounds good, snare punches nicely, hi hats and percussion are cool.
Now the 808 feels like it doesn't fit here, as the beat is kinda slow tempo and the 808s are short and coming at you pretty fast. Another thing is that it feels like the sort of keys sample/sound that loops throughout the song is taking up most of the space, clashing with the 808 on the lower end.

The thing I feel the most is that it lacks progression and variation. My take is that the beat shouldn't need lyrics to give it a context and anything interesting, that's why I advise to kinda break the loop on purpose and try incorporate new elements or give the ones you already have a twist - make the beat tell a story as well.
Send me some more stuff I'd love to hear it!

Also would love some feedback on my beat
 
Oh and one more from me, wanted some feedback here..

Nothing here yet.
This stays interesting and the changeups work. I would consider for every melody, adding a counter melody, and pan it to the opposite side so they bounce off of each other, adds another layer of complexity that makes things a little bit more interesting with more texture as the focus is drawn between the left and right channels
 
@OMAR. Clean beat, just not my type bro so I wouldnt be good feedback.. sounds good though
@Marc Duncan Really clean and clear beat, some guitars sound a bit too synthed, but nice ass beat.. really nice
@2GooD Productions Not Gonna Take It, love the vocals, beats clean and clear, maybe its me but kick could be a biot harder
2nd one @Memento Beats God of War, leave it be =P haha sounds good man, nice mix up
Play This, like the intro big time everything sounds good, like it 2 thumbs up
Dark Days, love the bass synth in the beginning, nicely mixed, got no issue but not my type beat
@PANTJA5ILA nicely done always throws me off when I hear an accent lol but sounds really good, fun beat and rap. Seems a slight bit too repeating on the music end, but thats my taste is all. Nicely done
@beatsmiff Fricken nice cut bro, was nodding my head at it.. on the Dre Beat!
Penguin isnt my type of jam, but the music is clean and sharp, nothing wrong with that mang.

Here is one I hope you will all review, my sons first shot on my music, his first rap.. so I want honest feedback there and then on my skills at producing the vocals and my music. Please be honest, I really need that here.. especially on his rapping ability. I started to post this earlier today until I realized it wasnt mixed and took it down cause sounded like hot dead ass.. anyhow

Thank you in advance!


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I want to sample that intro, this is dope. Nice play between the beat and the vocals, the dropouts are good. I like this man, I want to do something with it hahahaha
 

Beatmaker88

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Smooth feel, nice groove
That sounds really nice. Solid idea.
Kick sounds good, snare punches nicely, hi hats and percussion are cool.
Now the 808 feels like it doesn't fit here, as the beat is kinda slow tempo and the 808s are short and coming at you pretty fast. Another thing is that it feels like the sort of keys sample/sound that loops throughout the song is taking up most of the space, clashing with the 808 on the lower end.

The thing I feel the most is that it lacks progression and variation. My take is that the beat shouldn't need lyrics to give it a context and anything interesting, that's why I advise to kinda break the loop on purpose and try incorporate new elements or give the ones you already have a twist - make the beat tell a story as well.
Send me some more stuff I'd love to hear it!

Also would love some feedback on my beat

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Heres a flip I did of Memento's "God Of War"




Literally just finished this, its my attempt at a pop instrumental.

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All 4 are Dope, but the "not going to take it" and the play this are beyond fire. Go shit."


Heres a flip I did of Memento's "God Of War"




Literally just finished this, its my attempt at a pop instrumental.
 

Mahlhavoc

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Battle Points: 360
I want to sample that intro, this is dope. Nice play between the beat and the vocals, the dropouts are good. I like this man, I want to do something with it hahahaha
Thank you brother, hows the kids voice and alk and did I mix his voice right? Just trying to get feedback as I can.
 

WIKTO-GRIZZLY

WIKTO-GRIZZLY
Battle Points: 47

Wow MAn! Cool jazz boom bap!
really love all these old sounds!

Nice Drums

Beautiful, deep and sincere Beat! Beautiful solos! Did you do solo yourself or is it samples?


Heres a flip I did of Memento's "God Of War"




Literally just finished this, its my attempt at a pop instrumental.


Hi bro!
Wow, so many bits at once !! Super!
Let's go:
- The first cool, epic and very musical Beat!
- The second one, very angry, like a military march, very clearly conveyed the atmosphere of war.
- The third one is also evil, but in a gangster style. A good soundtrack for a break battle of the year))
- The fourth one is very pleasant and relaxing, it can be used perfectly for the sound of the sound,

In general, well done. Keep up the good work!

Did you do the lead in the guitar? This over beat I never heard before, very fresh to my ears.


Man your mixes and master is very nice, did you do it yourself? Do you provide mix and master services by any chance? Me personally like to hear that punch on the kick, but then this matter is very subjective :p
And how do you find the speech sample to go over with? It's nicely done, remind me of Pete Rock beats, he always have some on top his beats.

Anyway just drop this today, feat NatJames (unofficial). Let me know what you guys think!

Wow bro!
This is a full track that has every chance of becoming a big hit! Do the video clip))


Very surround sound in this beat!
Did you make it from samples or did you prescribe everything yourself?
It turned out very well!


Very interesting work! Cool and volume pad against the background (what kind of synthesizer?)
The style is very similar to Chillstep!

@OMAR. Clean beat, just not my type bro so I wouldnt be good feedback.. sounds good though
@Marc Duncan Really clean and clear beat, some guitars sound a bit too synthed, but nice ass beat.. really nice
@2GooD Productions Not Gonna Take It, love the vocals, beats clean and clear, maybe its me but kick could be a biot harder
2nd one @Memento Beats God of War, leave it be =P haha sounds good man, nice mix up
Play This, like the intro big time everything sounds good, like it 2 thumbs up
Dark Days, love the bass synth in the beginning, nicely mixed, got no issue but not my type beat
@PANTJA5ILA nicely done always throws me off when I hear an accent lol but sounds really good, fun beat and rap. Seems a slight bit too repeating on the music end, but thats my taste is all. Nicely done
@beatsmiff Fricken nice cut bro, was nodding my head at it.. on the Dre Beat!
Penguin isnt my type of jam, but the music is clean and sharp, nothing wrong with that mang.

Here is one I hope you will all review, my sons first shot on my music, his first rap.. so I want honest feedback there and then on my skills at producing the vocals and my music. Please be honest, I really need that here.. especially on his rapping ability. I started to post this earlier today until I realized it wasnt mixed and took it down cause sounded like hot dead ass.. anyhow

Thank you in advance!


Nothing here yet.
Yo FAM!
Cool sound!
Melody fire!
Well done!
I really like!

Oh and one more from me, wanted some feedback here..

Nothing here yet.
Wow!
Style Horror of the East!
Cool scary track!
 
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