Ride or Die Tonight Freestyle... looking for tips plz!

[Flip G]

let me know what ya'll think... just playing around today in the lab

 

[Leopard Cohen]

Rhymes are tight, beat is great.
Only feedback is that it feels like the horns are missing a progression - they keep ascending and my ears are waiting for a change-up that never happens.

 

[Flip G]

@Leopard Cohen Thanks for the feedback! I love getting new insights.... Sidenote: the horns and strings came from here:

 

[VVS]

let me know what ya'll think... just playing around today in the lab

Beat is nice! Love the Timbaland horns!

 

[K-waz]

Are you actually freestyling or is this a written freestyle?

 

[Flip G]

Are you actually freestyling or is this a written freestyle?

Freestyling but I did do punch-in's.... I wish I could one take it like:

 

[K-waz]

I like your words and the beat but I think you should be more cocky with your flow. When you're freestyling you have to spit those bars like no one can't F'd with you period. Basically just showoff your skills more

 

[digis]

Its dope man, I like alot of your stuff and it's consistent in the quality.
I think you are skilled.
I know that isn't a tip but I feel like you put in work and want to say it shows.

 

[Flip G]

I like your words and the beat but I think you should be more cocky with your flow. When you're freestyling you have to spit those bars like no one can F'd with you period. Basically just showoff your skills more

Hell yeah!

as far as production, who are you a fan of most and why?

 

[K-waz]

Hell yeah!

as far as production, who are you a fan of most and why?

JDilla, Kanye West, Marco Polo, Dr Dre & Jake One. All of their sample game is unmatched and they don't sound like no one else and their sound will be around forever