Agree with Kane, bassline is dope on this. I really like the loop ~1:05 (the one that's a bit more simple with the laugh at the end of the bar). I could almost see that along with the ~1:45 bar be a beat in itself too.
I thought the drums on mine would get me a couple votes, but maybe I went a little too far with the storytelling haha ... I've only been a runner up once but I guess not too shabby for only being 5 months or so back into beatmaking.
Sounds good to me and well produced. I like the drum fills a lot. I would have liked to hear the main guitar be a little louder in the mix as I feel like it gets overshadowed by the bass, but that's probably just personal preference. Good stuff.