dude needs a lot of work. I feel the main instrument is cool but needs some effects. some structure and change of some sounds plus a real beat. this could be nice with some work. sounds like it was made off a keyboard with minimal tracks.
This has a good vibe. The melody is nice. the drums are small and low in volume don't know if you meant to do that or not. I would make the drums louder then add an effect to make them set in the background if that's what you were going for. nice tho