Beat Fight #410

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attila

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 109
How beautiful and clean your beat is, with the parts complementing each other, there’s a sense of measure and contrasts, and the space definition and the mix are crystal clear and spacious. I should have taken more time... what I did doesn’t have any of these qualities... They challenged me again, guys please take it easy, there are so many people to challenge (and @BiggChev never says no).
 

P.A.T.

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 221
Very kind words! Your track is super grimey in that I could totally hear it at a giant rave with a big ass robot screen in the background and a sh!t ton of people rockin' in the crowd!!!!!
 

BiggChev

StormBourneMusic
Battle Points: 317
@P.A.T. - another great piano line! Smart choice introducing the melody right from the jump. I really like the arrangement. The switch from the lyrical/flowing piano line to the delay stabs was nice. The west coast lead synth is cool too. Another great melodic piece brother!

@attila - Definitely giving underground fight club fights. This kinda has "heist movie" montage vibes to it. There's something very early 2000s about this sound. I like the industrial and glitchy parts of the track. I like how you brought down the energy as we're waiting to hear what the final rule is and kicked back in with the crowd noise. I think it should've dropped back in a bit sooner though. After listening back, I heard some Cystal Method in here, especially with the chunky distorted bass line.
 

Tomblr

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 69
@P.A.T. loving that melody you put in there, also loving that part where the melody cut off, and start playing again
The bass inside is not really my cup of tea, but that's the only 'negative' point i have to say about it
Drums are nice and fitting with this one

@attila
I love that cinegraphic kind of beginning, after that robotic kind of way of sampling is dope

Y'all both did good work, enjoyed it alot!
 
@P.A.T. If Dre made trap beats, really dope composition. I think your beats would really benefit from a bit more FX, especially reverb. Just a sprinkling of reverb can make composition sound a lot better and take sounds from sounding stockish(midi as @Iron Keys stated before), to sounding professional and more realistic sounding. Put them into a space. Just my opinion, with just a little reverb your beats will be the full ticket.

@attila Thought it came in with the kick sounding a bit distorted, but in the context of the whole beat I think it works overall. Would suit a fight scene in a movie.

Going to give my vote to @P.A.T. on this occasion. Really sick composition.
 

attila

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 109
@P.A.T. If Dre made trap beats, really dope composition. I think your beats would really benefit from a bit more FX, especially reverb. Just a sprinkling of reverb can make composition sound a lot better and take sounds from sounding stockish(midi as @Iron Keys stated before), to sounding professional and more realistic sounding. Put them into a space. Just my opinion, with just a little reverb your beats will be the full ticket.

@attila Thought it came in with the kick sounding a bit distorted, but in the context of the whole beat I think it works overall. Would suit a fight scene in a movie.

Going to give my vote to @P.A.T. on this occasion. Really sick composition.
It's not a technical issue but a creative one. This beat could have its own function, like a soundtrack for some footage, as a minor accessory, maybe. It's not that it's horrible, but it's an old sound, and better has been done in this field. It has nothing personal, I would say it's completely superfluous, just deserving to be beaten.
 
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