My newest release.

Phenri

Master Beater
So... I'm in love with this one, but it feels like something might be slightly off. I can't quite put my finger on it. But that might just be me. I would love some feedback.

 
the beat gets really muddy around 18 seconds when that bass comes in it drowns out the piano, I think its clashing with the arpeggiated guitar a bit and thats what sounds off. theres a synth that comes in at 48 secs and goes off at 56 secs. Overall it sounds like a real chilled rnb beat, just fix up the parts where it goes offkey and clean up some of the mud between the piano and bass and its good, the sort of track somebody uses over their youtube video as they restore something they covered in mud.(coincidentally)
 

MichaelsLife

Created for a purpose
Battle Points: 5
I like this one! I agree with 2GooD, that bass line that comes in around 16 seconds doesn't seem to fit with the beat. It could be the sound of it, or the actual melody being played, or both. Other than that, everything seems to work well together. Nice work!
 
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