Showcase - April 8-14, 2019

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C4NTK33P5T1LL

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So I Shall Start
I Made This A Few weeks Back Sorry For The Long Intro
It's One Of Them Building Up & Collecting Sounds As It Goes On Beats
I Was Going For The Your So Pretty That's Why I Have To Remove Your Kidneys My Darling ! ! Type Feeling
Not That I've Ever Engaged In Such Macabre Activity
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madja

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So I Shall Start
I Made This A Few weeks Back Sorry For The Long Intro
It's One Of Them Building Up & Collecting Sounds As It Goes On Beats
I Was Going For The Your So Pretty That's Why I Have To Remove Your Kidneys My Darling ! ! Type Feeling
Not That I've Ever Engaged In Such Macabre Activity
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Not really liking the melody it may be the sound I'm not sure, but drums are clapping!

 

2GooD Productions

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@C4NTK33P5T1LL Not really feeling the synth or bassline, the drums are cool. It picks up a little once the extra sound comes in, it sort of helps it all mesh together better. I would consider some drum variation, play with the repetition a bit, the key to good music is subtle variation in the repeated loop, the subtle changes make the beat interesting and catch ears.

@madja The percussion on this just seems off, its stopping me from being able to get into the vibe of it. Needs more snare, that hits at the right time. Has so much room for expansion, has a lot of potential.
 
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Its got a NAS vibe to it!
So I Shall Start
I Made This A Few weeks Back Sorry For The Long Intro
It's One Of Them Building Up & Collecting Sounds As It Goes On Beats
I Was Going For The Your So Pretty That's Why I Have To Remove Your Kidneys My Darling ! ! Type Feeling
Not That I've Ever Engaged In Such Macabre Activity
Feedback Will Commence Upon Other Tracks When They Arrive
 

Beaubeats

Beau Beats
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@C4NTK33P5T1LL I enjoy the slow progression of it. Really works for story telling rappers I think. Slight variations on the drums would make it a little more interesting. The only thing that might make people stop listening before it gets to that point is the initial melody sound that starts around 40 seconds. People have trouble tolerating high octaves for too long. It subliminally irritates the ear a little. When the other sounds come in it is much more pleasing to listen too as its more balanced. Still dope though.

@madja I think it has a lot of potential. I think the 808 is a little to loud on the mix really drowning out the other drums. A more rhythmic snare or clap constant would make my head bop a little more for sure. It would also fit the dark feel a little more if it was a bit punchier at the snare or clap.

@EsquireMusic111 I really love how the vibe changes at the end. I really wanted to hear where that went lol I'm guessing the beat isn't really that short but more of a preview of the beat. Great production value and super clean.
 

Beaubeats

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I haven't used vocal samples in years so for this beat I just wanted to add a little more depth to it. I get bored with making one style so I try and keep it fresh.
 
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