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tommetass

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Here's one of my pieces I thought was decent enough to upload:
Man.. That beat reminds me of Nas. Really like the flow. Really feelgood sample, and great use of it. Digging that sound.

will provide feedback for everyone after work.

Loving the melody and the synth work here. Is that subtractor? Sounds great. Love the chill drums, and the shaker works really well.


I was wondering if I could get some feedback on my beat. Haven´t really been making music for the last 10 years. And I´m actually a Reason-user, so going from that to Ableton is a slow transition for me. This beat isn´t properly mastered, and it is a work in progress, but I´m kind of at a standstill and would love some tips moving forward with it.

 

The Thrillz

www.thethrillz.com
@tommetass Pretty dope beat bro. I like the vibe and the swing. I would only add an additional pad or pluck sounds to make the beat a little bit "bigger" other then that everything else is on point. Keep up with the good work!

@Matt-D Bro, this Consideration remix is pure fire! I really like the vibe and I wouldn't change anything.

@Fox The beat is mad dope! Nice sample work. I can definitely hear J.Cole on this! Keep em coming
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We dropped a new beat "Outlaw". Let me know what you think

 

madja

Member
@PhatRipz
I found the panning at the start to be a bit annoying since it never went to the right ear and felt unbalanced.
The pad sounds nice. The bass is also fun. The snare sounds way too stock and i would try and switch it out.
Im not big into this genre so i cant really give much more valuable input.

@EsquireMusic111
The main melody is very nice but it seems way too loud and on the brink of clipping almost.
Nice atmosphere with the pads. You could try replacing the drum sounds.

@K.D.R.
If the drums dropped after 8 bars it would be fantastic. But instead i was waiting for a drop that never arrived. I was expecting some big hard hitting drums with a solid strong deep rumbling 808. The main melody/sample was dope. You need to work on drums and drum patterns i think.

@Copyno
I think you nailed this style. I think it sounds exactly as it should. Cool

@Jesture
This is dope. i would maybe have gone with more traditiononal hip hop drums on this. but sounds cool. i like the main melody/sample.

@Reddix
i think maybe the intro should be more interesting because your drop was pretty nice. The intro was a little boring and generic.

@Nimbasabe
I got a chill lofi vybe from this but that one instrument was really making it repetetive and stabby. Maybe more sustained sound on it would help it flow more

@Fox
Super dope. I love this nothing to add. just a solid dope beat. Good vybes.

@Matt-D
Not heard the original but this sounds good to me. Solid as fuck.

@madja
Main sample sounds very high pitched. It sounds ok though. maybe add some reverb on it. Hi hat sound and snare was a little boring. Theres a click sound on the 808 thats super annoying. Should fix that. This beat could have been a banger. I would put in some more work.



Heres mine:
Your beat is MENTAL. Can I find it on YouTube? And thanks for your honest feedback I am still a beginner and I feel like I could've made it a little more better yeah. I will let you know when my new beat is online

Cool pumping beat !!
Thanks man!
 
So im weird and took the Dixie Chicks song Let er Rip....Cause who doesn't love the Dixie Chicks amaright? Anyway sampled bits and pieces of the song and this weird creation was born

 

TL Beats

DOPE BEATS ONLY
So im weird and took the Dixie Chicks song Let er Rip....Cause who doesn't love the Dixie Chicks amaright? Anyway sampled bits and pieces of the song and this weird creation was born

Everyone that makes music is weird. Nice flip tho fam. Idk how you get to the Dixie Chicks from rap but to each his own.
 

Jesture

Oda Kauffman
Battle Points: 5
@WIKTO-GRIZZLY

I liked it! But I won't lie.I did not understand any of the lyrics haha sorry. The beat intro with the pad like sounds then jumping with the melody was a really cool introduction. Nice simple bass really brought out the piano as well.
 

MickMain

Newbie
Battle Points: 2
@PhatRipz
Hey Bro I like the idea and the feel of your trackm I like that first transition the best tbh but overall like you said just need to work on your mixes and maybe your arragnment as well, feels a bit too much at some point in my opinion.

@EsquireMusic111
I like that sample man, the lazy feel with the, drums goes very well. those strings are very nice as well, only thing id say is the sample is a bit too loud for me, id maybe tone it down a bit at certain frequancies, and that switch up is mad! shame it ends soo fast after.

@K.D.R.
Cool track man, that sample is nice, would be nice to hear a drum drop at certain point to give it a nice kick.
The switch up is nice as well man!

@Copyno
That intro reminded me of the old dirty south beats man, the drop into the trappy bit is nice!

@Jesture
Nice sample man, its got a good jump to it, I like it.
I'd maybe change the string sound or lower them a bit

@Reddix
I like that track man its got a nice chill vibe!
The pluck melody and the drums are nice as well

@Nimbasabe
Good track man, the synth melody isnt in tune with the sample tho, id work on it more and get a nice thumping drum and bass sounds.

@dadadada321
Great swing on those drums man, the beat bangs but id work on the sounds a bit more, maybe balance the sample volume and the drums, good work tho!

@Fox
Great work man, that beats is very good, the sample choice is very nice as well!

@Matt-D
I like what you did there man, the vocals sit very nice on the beat.
They suit each other very nicely, good work my man!

@GhostChamberz
Hard beat bro but could do with more work on the mixing side, everything sounds too loud for me,
I would say the acapella choice doesnt really work here, it souds off beat like hes trying to catch up with it.

@WIKTO-GRIZZLY
Very nice my man! Ill work from start to finish, the beat, the vocals and the vibe were all on point!
Love me a good piano melody!

@tommetass
I like what you were going for there bro but I think the bell melody is off beat and throws the track off,
the bass is off but it jels well with the drums but if the melody was a bit more tamed itll improve the track in my opinion!
Great funky bass tho!

@The Thrillz
Great stuff man, not much I can say, I can defo see logic on this.

@artisanaljuice
Great creative idea, ive got some of those type of tracks myself lying around. I'd say work on the mix a bit better thos and that main stuttery sample is a bit off to me as well. Great concept.

@TL Beats
Good beat man, the kick is a bit too much for me could do with taming a bit in my opinion


Heres my latest one, its a dark sampled/lofi type of beat, went a bit experimental with the drums and the track a bit,
let me know what you think, if you dig it you can also download for free if you want, link in the discription of the track!

 
Heres my latest one, its a dark sampled/lofi type of beat, went a bit experimental with the drums and the track a bit,
let me know what you think, if you dig it you can also download for free if you want, link in the discription of the track!

I really like the down tempo feel of this beet my dood….Very well put together I don't really have any constructive criticism, every thing flows very nicely :)
 

MickMain

Newbie
Battle Points: 2

Matt-D

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 64
Boy what a week!! Alright Time for some feedback.
@PhatRipz sounds very original! Like you said mix could use some work but nice work.
@EsquireMusic111 I'm lovin this one!!
@K.D.R. Good beat but I was expecting maybe one more sound to come in, but at the same time I'm kind of glad it didn't because the beat sounds clean.
@Copyno This beat had me hyped, maybe turn the bass down a little, but the beat is definitely on point.
@Jesture dope beat with a solid mix nothing needs to be changed. Fire!
@Nimbasabe I like the vibe of this! I also love the way the drums knock.
@dadadada321 Oh Yess! Nice one indeed! Sounds good as is but I personally wished the kick was turned up just a little. lovin This!!
@Fox This is a solid beat, doesn't even need an artist it stands on its own two feet. This is one serious beat.
@GhostChamberz Lovin this remix! The beat really knocks and is fleshed out nicely
@WIKTO-GRIZZLY Great production work, and nice work with the keys and catchy vocals.
 

Matt-D

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 64
@tommetass I love it, this is a nice and simple beat. Very clean and knocks just right without being to overcrowded. I don't think that's a subtractor.
@The Thrillz Love the mix and arrangement of this beat. I gotta learn how to use that trap bass! Lovin that part
@MickMain Fire! Would love to hear an emcee on this one
@WIKTO-GRIZZLY Love your beat making videos you put a lot of feeling into this second one
 
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