Showcase - January 4-10, 2021

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Rah.sool

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@jafar4000 Nice job man! I feel like the arrangements are a little bit hectic, and some elements clash with each other. But if that's your intention, then it makes your music unique! Which is a good thing! Keep on it bro.

@The Thrillz Dude honestly this is incredible! extremely professional and cleanly mixed. No feedback from me. This is perfect.

@stcbeats Nice job bro. I really like this beat. Beat is very simple but it knocks. Only feedback is that 808 might be a little bit too loud. Great job bro!

Here's another one with some synth work and keys. Thanks in advance for feedback!
 

XIS

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This is a track I did then freestyled on to create... I'm going to start writing again but send me some pointers (I'm not Jay-z lol)

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@jafar4000 - (Irish) grimey track, gives me RZA energy... make me want to watch Akira lol...I like your use of textures, It gives the track a lot of character... the part when the bass switches up is dope too... nice job on this

(confidence Man) - this one gives me the energy of MF DOOM R.I.P (insert MJ cryface)... I like your style... it's raw hip hop... good job.. find some dope emcees for them joints yo! It will bring it full circle

@The Thrillz - nice clean mix, this is most defiantly a Weeknd record, I really like the melodies and how they form a harmony... I can ride to this on the interstate...I love it!

@stcbeats - super bass! this give me a RnB female singer vibe... I would like to hear one more instrument on the track to take it to a higher place if that makes sense... good foundation track for a writer


@Rah.sool - love the panning in the beginning of the track... snare is sat in the mix perfect, the arrangement keeps me involved, and the the melody and harmonies are excellent too... I would like to hear a J.cole or Nas rap on this... nice work

@beatsbytmj - very elegant and dramatic... this defiantly a backpack hip hop track, something Mos Def could rock out on...the chops are clean... post it when you're friend spit on that joint, I wanna hear how it turns out

@44Beatzz - this give me trech (Naughty by nature) vibes... I like the lofi sound and the vocals on the track (gives me an Idea of what you as the producer were thinking)... I miss when tracks were about a vibe like this... good job yo

@Hypermanbeatz - Mix sounds good... this giving me tech9 vibes...reverbs are super clean and I like the ping pong delays, it gives the track a lot of space... I would like to hear one more instrument or maybe a layering of an existing sound but good usable beat either way
 

stcbeats

Stcbeats
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This is a track I did then freestyled on to create... I'm going to start writing again but send me some pointers (I'm not Jay-z lol)

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@jafar4000 - (Irish) grimey track, gives me RZA energy... make me want to watch Akira lol...I like your use of textures, It gives the track a lot of character... the part when the bass switches up is dope too... nice job on this

(confidence Man) - this one gives me the energy of MF DOOM R.I.P (insert MJ cryface)... I like your style... it's raw hip hop... good job.. find some dope emcees for them joints yo! It will bring it full circle

@The Thrillz - nice clean mix, this is most defiantly a Weeknd record, I really like the melodies and how they form a harmony... I can ride to this on the interstate...I love it!

@stcbeats - super bass! this give me a RnB female singer vibe... I would like to hear one more instrument on the track to take it to a higher place if that makes sense... good foundation track for a writer


@Rah.sool - love the panning in the beginning of the track... snare is sat in the mix perfect, the arrangement keeps me involved, and the the melody and harmonies are excellent too... I would like to hear a J.cole or Nas rap on this... nice work

@beatsbytmj - very elegant and dramatic... this defiantly a backpack hip hop track, something Mos Def could rock out on...the chops are clean... post it when you're friend spit on that joint, I wanna hear how it turns out

@44Beatzz - this give me trech (Naughty by nature) vibes... I like the lofi sound and the vocals on the track (gives me an Idea of what you as the producer were thinking)... I miss when tracks were about a vibe like this... good job yo

@Hypermanbeatz - Mix sounds good... this giving me tech9 vibes...reverbs are super clean and I like the ping pong delays, it gives the track a lot of space... I would like to hear one more instrument or maybe a layering of an existing sound but good usable beat either way
really good vibe. mix and master really make this sound good.
 
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Rah.sool

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@beatsbytmj Yo this is clean bro! love the sample choice/chop. I like the tambourine percussion you used. I feel like scratching would work really well on this track if you're into that sort of thing. Awesome job bro.

@44Beatzz This here is too hard man. Perfectly matches the Das Efx rapping style. Real clean

@Hypermanbeatz Solid bro. I love the use of delay and pan on the background elements. Good stuff.

@XIS Nice job bro. Your vocals match your instrumentals perfectly! Real clean work chief
 

OMAR.

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wassup guys how are you doing? was busy beacause of some issues with my family now im back. i hope youre guys doing good.

@jafar4000 i like the way you put ya samples in. and the bass is really good. i could imagine mf doom on the 2nd one

@The Thrillz this is almost perferct. it has the original 80s and weeknd couldjump on it like he did in blinding lights. good work also the artwork.

@Rah.sool love it. has some old school new york vibes. the piano is really nice if u played it by yourself.

@44Beatzz diggaa der beat ist absolut dope.Man hoert direkt dass du auch am samplen bist.
mir gefallen auch die drums richtig gut.
weiter so.

@XIS this is good but defintely neet to worked out. i think it sounds a little 2 unfineshed.
your animation also confused me in a funny way. My humor lol.
 

OGBama

Cool Black Woman. Cig Blit Energy.
Yo @XIS as to writing pointers I'm no expert but start with object writing. Inbox me for an example I'm starting.
 
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XIS

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Yo, Firstly thank you ALL who have been listening to my songs the past couple of weeks, it means a lot to be heard.

@OGBama - you're absolutely right, I've been reading some books and most of them begin with a process similar to that.. I'm still in the digesting phase but I'm starting to have some fun.

@OMAR - track is solid and bell defiantly set the Tupac vibes, very moody, I wish the outlawz were still around... also thanks for the input too, I was feeling like the narrative could be focused more as well
 
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