Showcase - June 10-12, 2013
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Beat This!The next Beat This! Competition is from May 15-16th!
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Sample FlipFlip this! Andre Tschaskowski - "Grief".
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Porekush Beats
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let's start this showcase! check this out!
2infamouz
Mad Beats, No Angry Vegetables
ill o.g.
Battle Points: 10
Porekush: This is tight but I've got some constructive criticism lol...The backwards cymbal that leads to the regular one on drops sounds a bit off making it not transition very well between different sections, and also the swing is almost too much. I hate overquantized instrumentals - but this is sounding too off for me. I like the sample, the bass line sounds good, even the mix sounds overall pretty good, so other than what I mentioned above this is pretty dope 4 me.
That Fire:
Bass needs to come down a little on this, but other than that I'm feeling it so far - whatchu' think?
Koey
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 24
Peep
Porekush - Digging the intro clip. Something about the beat feels off to me. Not sure what it is. Some variation in the track would be nice. Gets a bit repetitive.
Ayron - Yeah the bass is pretty overpowering lol. It kinda drowns out the rest of the instruments. The levels for the instruments seem a bit extreme as in some are overpowering and some aren't audible enough. The instrumentation is nice though. Digging it for sure just think the levels of all the elements need to be redone so everything has some presence in the mix.
Porekush - Digging the intro clip. Something about the beat feels off to me. Not sure what it is. Some variation in the track would be nice. Gets a bit repetitive.
Ayron - Yeah the bass is pretty overpowering lol. It kinda drowns out the rest of the instruments. The levels for the instruments seem a bit extreme as in some are overpowering and some aren't audible enough. The instrumentation is nice though. Digging it for sure just think the levels of all the elements need to be redone so everything has some presence in the mix.
Porekush Beats
Newbie
Ayron Thelen: Thanks for the criticism man i'm gonna look those things next time!
I really liked your beat! That wasn't sample right?
Kohie: Nice beat man you did good work with this sample!
I really liked your beat! That wasn't sample right?
Kohie: Nice beat man you did good work with this sample!
Porekush: Really liked the mood of this one, but especially the middle part needs more variation (the part without the violin sample). IMO you've choosen good drum samples
Ayron: Had no problems with the bass, listening on laptop speakers
Very creative use of instruments/sounds, liked that. Lots of nice melody lines/chords. But I was a bit unsure what the different parts were supposed to be (verse, alternate version of the verse, chorus?) - of course not every song needs such a clear structure, though.
Kohie: Wasn't able to play your beat - even tried to find it on your soundcloud page, without luck.
Ayron: Had no problems with the bass, listening on laptop speakers
Very creative use of instruments/sounds, liked that. Lots of nice melody lines/chords. But I was a bit unsure what the different parts were supposed to be (verse, alternate version of the verse, chorus?) - of course not every song needs such a clear structure, though.Kohie: Wasn't able to play your beat - even tried to find it on your soundcloud page, without luck.
2infamouz
Mad Beats, No Angry Vegetables
ill o.g.
Battle Points: 10
Kohie: Ur getting real real smooth on them beats bro...Only thing I can complain about is the fact I didn't make the track myself.
Klangboks: Tribal drums got me ready to dance in a buttflap with grass slippers Cold drums. The ringing / telephone synth thing sounds like the delay is off a bit, Idk i think if u played w/ the timing on that delay it'd sound a lot better, overall the tracks dope.
Klangboks: Tribal drums got me ready to dance in a buttflap with grass slippers
Cold drums. The ringing / telephone synth thing sounds like the delay is off a bit, Idk i think if u played w/ the timing on that delay it'd sound a lot better, overall the tracks dope.
jayworst54
Newbie
My newest Beat "Out of the Rain" check it out!
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Koey
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 24
Thanks for the feed fellas. Checking out everyone else's beats.
Klang - Beat is different. Mix is real full, like that. Some of the melodic elements I'm not a big fan of. I just feel like they don't mesh well together.
Gex - Sample is dope. I think I recognize it, I might actually have used the same sample as well. The vocals on it sound mad familiar haha. You did a good job with it though. Only gripe is the snare. Not a big fan of it. Other than that good work.
Klang - Beat is different. Mix is real full, like that. Some of the melodic elements I'm not a big fan of. I just feel like they don't mesh well together.
Gex - Sample is dope. I think I recognize it, I might actually have used the same sample as well. The vocals on it sound mad familiar haha. You did a good job with it though. Only gripe is the snare. Not a big fan of it. Other than that good work.
jayworst54
Newbie
Thx for comment man, ok yes a lot of peoples in different forums told me that they dont like the snare I'll try an other one. But its not a sample i played it by myself with a massive preset.
Thx again
And your beat, as i said it in a other forum i really like the variation with the sample.
I'll try an other one. But its not a sample i played it by myself with a massive preset.Thx again
And your beat, as i said it in a other forum i really like the variation with the sample.
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