Showcase - June 18-24, 2018

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dBtheProducer

Autism Dad, I Use FL Studio
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good morning, warm summer day in virginia...im in the northern va area and its hot af out here...good thing im cooling it at my office in the AC...

my greatest creation ever is and will always be my son, happy belated fathers day to all the dads...go head old heads!

i have a beat i want to share with you all and would like to get some feedback on...its so early in this thread so what ill do is review some of the beats from the last showcase that i didnt get a chance to review...

i honestly like giving feedback and checking out everybodys music... aight lets get this going...

@thizzbeatz sup homie, drake and lil baby type beat...i agree i could hear drake doing something to this...everything was clickin nicely the whole way through and im feeling the mix, not a whole lot going on but i hear everything clear and shit nice work man real shit

@KuKo sup man, out of the 2 beats i liked the second better, im not a lil pump fan but this beat sounds alot better than the first one...not really my kind of music taste personally but overall i would this beat was aight i would keep working at it though bro

@K.D.R. sup man...got to be honest not really liking this beat had to switch this up after about 40 seconds in...nothing personal man im just keeping it moving on this pimpin...

@TAM hey nice to meet ya...i am not going to lie to you bro...i almost gave up on this beat tape but that blue pill beat you have on there is some fire! atleast i think so that shit sound like some pusha t/clipse type shit for real...in comparison to the rest of the beat tape....it was atleast 1 gem in the bunch blue pill sounds dope...nice work!

@RizzakBeats wow amazing chorus change that shit made me love this beat...its simple but i love that west coast bounce to this i could hear this being a dope record...nice work man that chorus is fucking lit its my most favorite part of the beat...kind of cool chill funky but yet epic kind of feel its a cool vibe youve made nice work

@JAY UNO sup man...thats a cool sample fam i like what you did hear...smooth sample and a clean chop nice work man i liked what i heard here...this sounds like something you would hear on a snoop record, like maybe during an interlude or something definately something familiar that i love about this sound nice work man

@C4NTK33P5T1LL hello, this beat has a sine wave or something in that is blowing my ears out...needs to be turned down...really too loud

@Kod4R sup brother, thanks for your feedback from last week...do you mind if i ask what kod4r stands for ive always wondered? what does it mean? any im digging the sample work here this definately has hardcore rap appeal i could hear a lyrical mc killing this shit for sure...i like the reversing in the chorus area, maybe would made the bass an octave lower but overall i liked what i heard man nice work!

@producervibes hey nice to see ya again...this beat is amazing man i dont know who the hot boy crew is but im an ancient dinosaur so dont mind me, but i could tell when someone is sampling trap but you sir are the real deal, you got a real talent for this trap music and i could tell by listening to all your prior stuff that you arent doing this for "fashion" you take this beat shit seriously and i can hear and feel it on every beat youve shared on here and i commend you for that real shit ...this beat in particular hitting perfectly and is one of my fav's that ive heard from ya nice job

ok... now on to this weeks beats

@dot. hello nice to meet ya... wow this kind of threw me off guard...in a good way if im not clear...i like this track man its different and reminds me of some of Labrinth type shit...very very very nice work
man im digging the vibe

@DEEZ BEATZ sup og, 1st beat...loving what i hear so far...key work sounds dope i like those keys im hearing...my fav part in the instruments to this beat for sure...short and sweet that was sounding cool af
2nd beat...this remind me of that slim jesus record...i could definately hear that white boy on this shit here...crazy ass joint here man the intensity is bananas got me feeling like muthafuckers are out to get me kind of vibe. lol good job og

and finally i got this beat here i wanted to show yall...peace!

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good morning, warm summer day in virginia...im in the northern va area and its hot af out here...good thing im cooling it at my office in the AC...

my greatest creation ever is and will always be my son, happy belated fathers day to all the dads...go head old heads!

i have a beat i want to share with you all and would like to get some feedback on...its so early in this thread so what ill do is review some of the beats from the last showcase that i didnt get a chance to review...

i honestly like giving feedback and checking out everybodys music... aight lets get this going...

@thizzbeatz sup homie, drake and lil baby type beat...i agree i could hear drake doing something to this...everything was clickin nicely the whole way through and im feeling the mix, not a whole lot going on but i hear everything clear and shit nice work man real shit

@KuKo sup man, out of the 2 beats i liked the second better, im not a lil pump fan but this beat sounds alot better than the first one...not really my kind of music taste personally but overall i would this beat was aight i would keep working at it though bro

@K.D.R. sup man...got to be honest not really liking this beat had to switch this up after about 40 seconds in...nothing personal man im just keeping it moving on this pimpin...

@TAM hey nice to meet ya...i am not going to lie to you bro...i almost gave up on this beat tape but that blue pill beat you have on there is some fire! atleast i think so that shit sound like some pusha t/clipse type shit for real...in comparison to the rest of the beat tape....it was atleast 1 gem in the bunch blue pill sounds dope...nice work!

@RizzakBeats wow amazing chorus change that shit made me love this beat...its simple but i love that west coast bounce to this i could hear this being a dope record...nice work man that chorus is fucking lit its my most favorite part of the beat...kind of cool chill funky but yet epic kind of feel its a cool vibe youve made nice work

@JAY UNO sup man...thats a cool sample fam i like what you did hear...smooth sample and a clean chop nice work man i liked what i heard here...this sounds like something you would hear on a snoop record, like maybe during an interlude or something definately something familiar that i love about this sound nice work man

@C4NTK33P5T1LL hello, this beat has a sine wave or something in that is blowing my ears out...needs to be turned down...really too loud

@Kod4R sup brother, thanks for your feedback from last week...do you mind if i ask what kod4r stands for ive always wondered? what does it mean? any im digging the sample work here this definately has hardcore rap appeal i could hear a lyrical mc killing this shit for sure...i like the reversing in the chorus area, maybe would made the bass an octave lower but overall i liked what i heard man nice work!

@producervibes hey nice to see ya again...this beat is amazing man i dont know who the hot boy crew is but im an ancient dinosaur so dont mind me, but i could tell when someone is sampling trap but you sir are the real deal, you got a real talent for this trap music and i could tell by listening to all your prior stuff that you arent doing this for "fashion" you take this beat shit seriously and i can hear and feel it on every beat youve shared on here and i commend you for that real shit ...this beat in particular hitting perfectly and is one of my fav's that ive heard from ya nice job

ok... now on to this weeks beats

@dot. hello nice to meet ya... wow this kind of threw me off guard...in a good way if im not clear...i like this track man its different and reminds me of some of Labrinth type shit...very very very nice work
man im digging the vibe

@DEEZ BEATZ sup og, 1st beat...loving what i hear so far...key work sounds dope i like those keys im hearing...my fav part in the instruments to this beat for sure...short and sweet that was sounding cool af
2nd beat...this remind me of that slim jesus record...i could definately hear that white boy on this shit here...crazy ass joint here man the intensity is bananas got me feeling like muthafuckers are out to get me kind of vibe. lol good job og

and finally i got this beat here i wanted to show yall...peace!

<iframe width="100%" height="300" scrolling="no" frameborder="no" allow="autoplay" src=""></iframe>

@dBtheProducer , yeah man it's starting off hot this morning here in Seattle..70 degrees and only 9am...now about your beat...as always you bring that jazzy hip hop sound that I freaking love..that flute reminds me of that old George Benson track "breezin". 100 percent Str8 Dope...and thanks for the props bruh.. that's what keeps me going
 

wilizm

Newbie
@dBtheProducer I luv me some boom Bap soundin' beats. I could see Black Thought on that tearing it up.

@DEEZ BEATZ Certified and Sealed are Hard. I could see some hard bars on this.



Late 90s Rawkus Boom Bap Type Beat in FL Studio 2 (fruityloops 2.7.1)

Just keeping it simple, but still trying to be creative with limitations. Only effects are really:

- FX 1(Overdrive)
- Sine FX 2(ring modulator)
- FX 3 (Phaser).
- Amp
- Attack
- Decay
- Reso filter
- Cutoff
- Reverb
- Fade L to R
- Cut/Cut by
- Stretch
- Fade out

VST1 support:

- Fruity 7 band EQ
- Fruity balance
- Fruity bass boost
- Fruity blood overdrive
- Fruity center
- Fruity delay
- Fruity fast LP
- Fruity filter
- Fruity free filter
- Fruity mute 2
- Fruity phase inverter
- Fruity reeverb

Constructive Feedback Appreciated
 

dot.

Newbie
@DEEZ BEATZ
thanks for the feedback!
  • The track 'NEVER GOING BROKE' has a really nice melody and the mix is great. It might stand out even more with some vocals/rap on top- at the moment it feels like it still lacks some depth/layers.
  • 'CERTIFIED & SEALED' is awesome and it hits really hard! How'd you even make this? :)
@dBtheProducer
thank you for the kind words!
  • 'TIME' is crazy nice, man. I'm really vibing to it. Not only is it well mastered and mixed it's not at all dull or predictable. Captivates and evolves :)
@wilizm
  • The track may be simple but it is effective. Honestly I kind of dig it! The chord progression and the melody are nice and the beat itself is solid.
  • Some audio effects could help certain instruments stand out more and make the entire mix sound wider. The track would also benefit from a more refined ending- as it is now, it just kind of ends abruptly.
 
@DEEZ BEATZ
thanks for the feedback!
  • The track 'NEVER GOING BROKE' has a really nice melody and the mix is great. It might stand out even more with some vocals/rap on top- at the moment it feels like it still lacks some depth/layers.
  • 'CERTIFIED & SEALED' is awesome and it hits really hard! How'd you even make this? :)
@dBtheProducer
thank you for the kind words!
  • 'TIME' is crazy nice, man. I'm really vibing to it. Not only is it well mastered and mixed it's not at all dull or predictable. Captivates and evolves :)
@wilizm
  • The track may be simple but it is effective. Honestly I kind of dig it! The chord progression and the melody are nice and the beat itself is solid.
  • Some audio effects could help certain instruments stand out more and make the entire mix sound wider. The track would also benefit from a more refined ending- as it is now, it just kind of ends abruptly.
@Dot , I have keyboards & synths that's what I do with money I make from selling beats and I also produce Hip Hop, RRB,dupstep, trapstep, hard trap , EDM ...etc. I am a producer not just a beatmaker bruh...I totally appreciate your feedback. Thanks and you can always go to topmixtapes.com and check out my mixtapes or just google "Deez Beatz" and see my history of music I have produced.
 

A.R. DASUPASTAR

A.R. DASUPASTAR
Battle Points: 104
good morning, warm summer day in virginia...im in the northern va area and its hot af out here...good thing im cooling it at my office in the AC...

my greatest creation ever is and will always be my son, happy belated fathers day to all the dads...go head old heads!

i have a beat i want to share with you all and would like to get some feedback on...its so early in this thread so what ill do is review some of the beats from the last showcase that i didnt get a chance to review...

i honestly like giving feedback and checking out everybodys music... aight lets get this going...

@thizzbeatz sup homie, drake and lil baby type beat...i agree i could hear drake doing something to this...everything was clickin nicely the whole way through and im feeling the mix, not a whole lot going on but i hear everything clear and shit nice work man real shit

@KuKo sup man, out of the 2 beats i liked the second better, im not a lil pump fan but this beat sounds alot better than the first one...not really my kind of music taste personally but overall i would this beat was aight i would keep working at it though bro

@K.D.R. sup man...got to be honest not really liking this beat had to switch this up after about 40 seconds in...nothing personal man im just keeping it moving on this pimpin...

@TAM hey nice to meet ya...i am not going to lie to you bro...i almost gave up on this beat tape but that blue pill beat you have on there is some fire! atleast i think so that shit sound like some pusha t/clipse type shit for real...in comparison to the rest of the beat tape....it was atleast 1 gem in the bunch blue pill sounds dope...nice work!

@RizzakBeats wow amazing chorus change that shit made me love this beat...its simple but i love that west coast bounce to this i could hear this being a dope record...nice work man that chorus is fucking lit its my most favorite part of the beat...kind of cool chill funky but yet epic kind of feel its a cool vibe youve made nice work

@JAY UNO sup man...thats a cool sample fam i like what you did hear...smooth sample and a clean chop nice work man i liked what i heard here...this sounds like something you would hear on a snoop record, like maybe during an interlude or something definately something familiar that i love about this sound nice work man

@C4NTK33P5T1LL hello, this beat has a sine wave or something in that is blowing my ears out...needs to be turned down...really too loud

@Kod4R sup brother, thanks for your feedback from last week...do you mind if i ask what kod4r stands for ive always wondered? what does it mean? any im digging the sample work here this definately has hardcore rap appeal i could hear a lyrical mc killing this shit for sure...i like the reversing in the chorus area, maybe would made the bass an octave lower but overall i liked what i heard man nice work!

@producervibes hey nice to see ya again...this beat is amazing man i dont know who the hot boy crew is but im an ancient dinosaur so dont mind me, but i could tell when someone is sampling trap but you sir are the real deal, you got a real talent for this trap music and i could tell by listening to all your prior stuff that you arent doing this for "fashion" you take this beat shit seriously and i can hear and feel it on every beat youve shared on here and i commend you for that real shit ...this beat in particular hitting perfectly and is one of my fav's that ive heard from ya nice job

ok... now on to this weeks beats

@dot. hello nice to meet ya... wow this kind of threw me off guard...in a good way if im not clear...i like this track man its different and reminds me of some of Labrinth type shit...very very very nice work
man im digging the vibe

@DEEZ BEATZ sup og, 1st beat...loving what i hear so far...key work sounds dope i like those keys im hearing...my fav part in the instruments to this beat for sure...short and sweet that was sounding cool af
2nd beat...this remind me of that slim jesus record...i could definately hear that white boy on this shit here...crazy ass joint here man the intensity is bananas got me feeling like muthafuckers are out to get me kind of vibe. lol good job og

and finally i got this beat here i wanted to show yall...peace!

<iframe width="100%" height="300" scrolling="no" frameborder="no" allow="autoplay" src=""></iframe>

I love the thickness of the kicks & the fact that this isn't a Type beat, bigs ups for the originality
 

A.R. DASUPASTAR

A.R. DASUPASTAR
Battle Points: 104
@dBtheProducer I luv me some boom Bap soundin' beats. I could see Black Thought on that tearing it up.

@DEEZ BEATZ Certified and Sealed are Hard. I could see some hard bars on this.



Late 90s Rawkus Boom Bap Type Beat in FL Studio 2 (fruityloops 2.7.1)

Just keeping it simple, but still trying to be creative with limitations. Only effects are really:

- FX 1(Overdrive)
- Sine FX 2(ring modulator)
- FX 3 (Phaser).
- Amp
- Attack
- Decay
- Reso filter
- Cutoff
- Reverb
- Fade L to R
- Cut/Cut by
- Stretch
- Fade out

VST1 support:

- Fruity 7 band EQ
- Fruity balance
- Fruity bass boost
- Fruity blood overdrive
- Fruity center
- Fruity delay
- Fruity fast LP
- Fruity filter
- Fruity free filter
- Fruity mute 2
- Fruity phase inverter
- Fruity reeverb

Constructive Feedback Appreciated

Just needs some compression on the master track. Vol. too low, but the beat is good
 
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