Showcase - March 4-10, 2019

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Matt-D

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 72
Here is a beatmaking video I did the other day!! It's definitely low budget but it's the best I can do for now lol!

 

Taron

Noone really
Battle Points: 1
@Matt-D idk wtf to say after watching that, but it kept my attention so I guess I appreciate it lmao

I got this beat here, I released it like a week ago but forgot to put it up here so here ya go guys, ill try to keep up and actually reply to people throwing an opinion on me and giving opinions back ofc.

I sampled like half a second of OutKast Gasoline Dreams for the vocal thingies, other than that its all non-samples original composed electronic bs

 

Dahmi Mortals

ReZoUnD
Battle Points: 31
Here is a beatmaking video I did the other day!! It's definitely low budget but it's the best I can do for now lol!

we all start somewhere, try syncing your videos with a clap or sharp transient to line up all videos then edit them together to be flawless with the sound and when you press a key on your midi controller
 

Dahmi Mortals

ReZoUnD
Battle Points: 31
@Matt-D idk wtf to say after watching that, but it kept my attention so I guess I appreciate it lmao

I got this beat here, I released it like a week ago but forgot to put it up here so here ya go guys, ill try to keep up and actually reply to people throwing an opinion on me and giving opinions back ofc.

I sampled like half a second of OutKast Gasoline Dreams for the vocal thingies, other than that its all non-samples original composed electronic bs

its not in key but it still works.
@Matt-D idk wtf to say after watching that, but it kept my attention so I guess I appreciate it lmao

I got this beat here, I released it like a week ago but forgot to put it up here so here ya go guys, ill try to keep up and actually reply to people throwing an opinion on me and giving opinions back ofc.

I sampled like half a second of OutKast Gasoline Dreams for the vocal thingies, other than that its all non-samples original composed electronic bs

its not in key but it works. I grip about sampling sometimes but my and any other opinion on that shouldnt sway u away from sampling and to take it further go to billboards top 100 and mimic all the beats as best as you can to get your production skills up and get tuned in on the trends.
 

Matt-D

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 72
@Taron lol well I'm glad it least it kept your attention. OK feedback time, I think the mix is ok but the beat seems out of tune like @Dahmi Mortals said, it's not bad just needs some more work.
@Dahmi Mortals thanks for the advice but I think i'm gonna retire my filming game lol. Your beat is definetly different, I think it would go better with a game or movie scene. Great job of being original and bringing something new.

Alright let's try one more for the week kept this one simple

 

madja

Member
@Matt-D idk wtf to say after watching that, but it kept my attention so I guess I appreciate it lmao

I got this beat here, I released it like a week ago but forgot to put it up here so here ya go guys, ill try to keep up and actually reply to people throwing an opinion on me and giving opinions back ofc.

I sampled like half a second of OutKast Gasoline Dreams for the vocal thingies, other than that its all non-samples original composed electronic bs

Sounds good but does get a little too hectic at times just a tip to keep it maybe a little more simple

 

tommetass

Newbie
Sounds good but does get a little too hectic at times just a tip to keep it maybe a little more simple

Like the drums and rythm, but not sure if I'm a superfan of the distorted bass and kick. But good flow!

Digging the transitions and the theme. Great choice of sounds as well.. really moody and cool.

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I don't know what the rules are for posting a work in progress in the last showcase and then posting the finished beat in the next.. but I'm gonna try, but just delete if it's against the rules.

I added a synth and mastered it a bit better IMO.

 

WIKTO-GRIZZLY

WIKTO-GRIZZLY
@Taron lol well I'm glad it least it kept your attention. OK feedback time, I think the mix is ok but the beat seems out of tune like @Dahmi Mortals said, it's not bad just needs some more work.
@Dahmi Mortals thanks for the advice but I think i'm gonna retire my filming game lol. Your beat is definetly different, I think it would go better with a game or movie scene. Great job of being original and bringing something new.

Alright let's try one more for the week kept this one simple

Hi men!
Cool beat! Classical style!
 

VCFan1001

Member
I like that first loop bro!
Thanks, man appreciate it. I was really diggin it I was hesitant to upload it cuz I thought it was bad compared to what you guys got up here, but hopefully one day I can be as good as you guys. I really liked your beat called whimsicle you posted like last week has my head noddin lol
 
Battle Points: 63
Thanks, man appreciate it. I was really diggin it I was hesitant to upload it cuz I thought it was bad compared to what you guys got up here, but hopefully one day I can be as good as you guys. I really liked your beat called whimsicle you posted like last week has my head noddin lol
Thanks boss, don't ever be afraid to post your work in here, been on this site for a while now and the criticism is always in reference to learning as much as possible with production! Keep grinding!
 

MickMain

Newbie
Battle Points: 2
@Taron
Im liking that delay vocals youre using, I think after the intro with all the vocals snaps and fx its sounding great but it throws it when you go into that piano melody, not a fan if im honest. The main string melody is good but I think its lacking something, it sounds too repatetive if you had something to back it up coming in every 4 batrs or at the end of evey 4/8 would be nice, good work overall bro!

@Dahmi Mortals
I like the dark feel of your first track bro, that bass is ill but I think the low end is very messy with the kick and bass and everything playing together, bit more mixing would make it ill!
Same with the second track bro, great dark feeling, but I think you could do with some more mixing work, the track is nice but its a bit much with everything going on, just a balance issue in my opinion, ill tracks tho!

@Matt-D
Sick drop into the beat bro, I like that sample and the choppings nice as well, think the drums may be too forward for me or it could just be the hi-hats but I think the sample could do with a bit of boost or drums lowering. Like that syth coming on, its well funky beat!

@BISHOPbenz.
Great sample choice man, those drums really sit well with that bro, the synth as well comes in for a bit of variety, think its pretty solid bro! A good MC on this would sound nice!

@madja
Nice melody man, I like the sound of that piano/music box, very nice!
Pretty solid bro, the 808 is nice as well, just a bit of tweak with the kick I think coz of the drum pattern its a bit wild but good beat tho!

@VCFan1001
Hey man liking those drums bro, the first beat is nice but I think you could do a bit more of those chops, not really digging that chop pattern. The second beat is better in my opinion, with some bass another sample to play with it itll sound ill!

@Copyno
Hey man the way that beat drops is mad! The intro is very nice as well man I like what you did there.
Not much to say bro solid work!

@EsquireMusic111
Really nice man, its got a real good pop vibe to it man,
solid stuff bro!

@WIKTO-GRIZZLY
Love your stuff bro, that piano is nice! The groove and drums are hard!

Heres my latest, would appreciate feedback on the mix since I been going back and forth with it for a while
 
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