Showcase - October 15-21, 2018

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Ways

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hey everybody..this is a little preview track ft, 247 outta 9th ward Houston,Texas.My New Mixtape "PURPLE FLOW" is scheduled to drop in DEC. 2018. Illmuzik is the first and only place that i will upload snippets from the new mixtape..so Illiens consider yourself fortunate..cause you get the first taste of it...ENJOY!!!!! & PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT OR FEEDBACK...


Really dope bro! Let me know when you release it. I want to hear the whole thing
 

Ways

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hey everybody..this is a little preview track ft, 247 outta 9th ward Houston,Texas.My New Mixtape "PURPLE FLOW" is scheduled to drop in DEC. 2018. Illmuzik is the first and only place that i will upload snippets from the new mixtape..so Illiens consider yourself fortunate..cause you get the first taste of it...ENJOY!!!!! & PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT OR FEEDBACK...


Really dope bro! Let me know when you release it. I want to hear the whole thing
I really love the 808, but I find the claps are a little to high. Other than that its pretty solid, i also like what you did with your art work. Keep em' coming man.


Looking to get some feedback on one of newer tracks. I love the vibes here and think to learn something from everyone here. Thank you.


I really like the vibe it gives off, I could picture someone with a flow like Token/Old school shady killin' it on this beat. Its serious but has a playful aspect to it at the same time. Like the 808's to. Something I'm trying to get down ahha. Good work bro!
 

DEEZ BEATZ

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So, i started out making beats on my phone about a year ago. I recently started getting really serious about producing, and getting better at my skill. I have made 3 beats so far that i have posted. (there's 4, but that one was made on my phone) This one, has to be my favorite one I have made so far. I know i have a lot more to learn, and would love for any feedback.
I look forward to listening to your beats as well.

this beat is called lost, i was inspired by the vibe "stan" gave off and put it in my own feelings. Enjoy :)

@Ways , bruh this beat is really smooth..there is no advice that I can give you..all I can say is that this is put together very well...nice mix also..I love to hear beats that are clean and on point..keep Banging!!!
 

Ways

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@Ways , bruh this beat is really smooth..there is no advice that I can give you..all I can say is that this is put together very well...nice mix also..I love to hear beats that are clean and on point..keep Banging!!!
Thanks a lot bro! Really appreciate it
 

Memento Beats

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@El West Very smooth beat. My favorite part is that breakdown at 1:34 but I also like the sound of 808. The levels in your mix are nice, I think maybe clap and kick are a little bit too quiet but I reckon it's just a matter of individual taste. Personally, I like to keep drums rather loud but it is just an individual preference and of course the atmosphere of the song has a lot to do here. As I mentioned above very smooth beat. The one thing that may have not been the best choice in my opinion is that flute part. I don't know why but somehow I don't feel it but overall it's a decent production. :) Besides music you have a very well designed logotype. ;)
 

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@Marquise Bryant Confusion- The beginning of the beat has a very epic sound. I like the sound of the piano. Drums are in front and well mixed. Your way of mixing drums reminds me of my style. :p Because if you listen to my beats for example from the beginning of this year they also have similar drums. But unfortunately, I can barely hear the bass. So low-end in this beat is its weak point.

Nightmare-Firstly, when it comes to good sides, they are similar to 'Confusion'. I like the drums and the melody line. And here you have a very nice sounding 808. So as far as I'm concerned this beat is better than 'Confusion'. But I think the best part of both of your beats is your style of production because in my opinion your beats are different than many beats we can hear now. They have a specific atmosphere but I think you wanted to kept those beats in such a dark environment because of the concept of your project (A Lost Mind).
 

Marquise Bryant

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@DEEZ BEATZ - Just listened now, first of all gotta say I love the vocal sample you use throughout, it links hard and makes the beat unique in my opinion.
The snares and hats sit nicely in the mix too not too overbearing so the rappers got a lot of space.
Perhaps a little piano chords around the hook part? That'd sound sexy man..some nice chords to really bring it out. Could also consider spreading the snare to give it that depth. but these are minor tings. Other than that, swaheeet tune and looking forward to the release.

@Memento Beats - Love this trap man..sounds clean and the piano is nice (I'm always a lover for the authentic instruments!) love what you did with the bass by pitching it higher every now and then. Keeps things flowing all smooth and shizz. Nice beat bro.

@producervibes - Lovvvee this beat bro. The melody is nice and jumpy and you got me throwing some bars down not gonna lie haha..the subass comes through deliciously. And nice piano notes in the back. I'd agree with @Memento Beats about the clap though. Maybe could EQ it so it comes through a bit sharper? But good job man.

@Marquise Bryant -

CONFUSION- Nice melody man, dark and deep and the beat matches the feels. I don't feel much bass coming through in the chorus though..be nice to have some waving through. Maybe could expand on this during the chorus section?
at about 02:23 - Sweet section man. Nice piano riffs and the pad goes nicely behind it. (What VST you use for that btw?)
As regards to the mix, maybe consider tunning that piano right downnn let the pads and beat come through. The higher melodies are fine as they are. I'm just on about the chords. Nice tune tho bro, keep it up.

NIGHTMARE - This beat is on point :up2: yanno it's on point when you catch me using emoji's. Very clear mix and the 808's nice man. SIdechained not too much but not too little - Sounds hard.
On a side side note - I know there's no vocals to this yet, but could consider turning down the leads ever so slightly again. Only reason I say this is cause if you ain't doing track out then rappers would have a hard time getting their voice through as it'd come through a similar frequency. But as I said, this is a side note and I ain't no expert. Nice beat tho broski and again, keep them coming.
Thank you for the feedback. I mostly use reFX Nexus 2 and Massive.
 

Marquise Bryant

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@Marquise Bryant Confusion- The beginning of the beat has a very epic sound. I like the sound of the piano. Drums are in front and well mixed. Your way of mixing drums reminds me of my style. :p Because if you listen to my beats for example from the beginning of this year they also have similar drums. But unfortunately, I can barely hear the bass. So low-end in this beat is its weak point.

Nightmare-Firstly, when it comes to good sides, they are similar to 'Confusion'. I like the drums and the melody line. And here you have a very nice sounding 808. So as far as I'm concerned this beat is better than 'Confusion'. But I think the best part of both of your beats is your style of production because in my opinion your beats are different than many beats we can hear now. They have a specific atmosphere but I think you wanted to kept those beats in such a dark environment because of the concept of your project (A Lost Mind).
Yes. Exactly what I was going for. I tried to also add a piano to each beat as well. On Confusion, there's only a kick, so such i make the kick more punchy? When it comes to beat making, i like the mixing process more so i try to improve on it as much as i can. thanks for the feedback as well. i also checked out your beats and i like them. i can see what your talking about with the drums.
 

Marquise Bryant

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I have one more for you guys, this is one of my RnB tracks (for me at least). I hope you guys enjoy and give lots of feedback please.

 

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Let me know what you guys think. Thanks ahead the the input.
I like this beat a lot bruh, it hits hard but has a futuristic sound to it as well...and thanks for the feedback...I used to make simple beats until started producing for artists and then I had to step it up...got more involved with better software and keyboards, drum machines etc...in other words I am evolving bruh..lol
 
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