Showcase - September 9-11, 2011

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Post your beats! And please provide feedback.

*Remember: Give feedback, then post your beat.

 

[Swift]

http://soundcloud.com/rgsbeats/vernacular-development

 

[aBeatBaker]

@gustto Vernacular
I like how it fades in.I like the samples and breaks too, I'd just add a bass line or something low to hold down the bottom.

here's mine
570
http://soundcloud.com/abeatbaker/570-1
instrumental
http://soundcloud.com/abeatbaker/570-1

 

[LouBez]

Gusto...I like this vibe, my guy NoEmotion would prolly do something cool to this...hit him up on FB if you wanna collab with a real creative dude, and I agree with Beatbaker about the bottom

Damn Beatbaker, your track is rugged as fuck...that click that happens at the end of that first sample you got dropping is messing with me tough...but, I definatly just played that track back three times

 

[UNORTHODOX]

http://soundcloud.com/rgsbeats/vernacular-development

Its good, but I'd turn down the bass a bit on the verse but turn it up on the Chr part. Balance it out

And get another instru to chop and add some variation

@gustto Vernacular
I like how it fades in.I like the samples and breaks too, I'd just add a bass line or something low to hold down the bottom.

here's mine
570

Its good, but you need to separate the instruments more. The voice is stuck behind the beat, not in the good way. Its also VERRRRY short, not a good short with a natural ending, it just kinda...cuts off

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Edit: What happened to everyone complaining about the death of ILL?? This thread should have WAAAAAYYYYYYY more reviews, yall all talk huh??

 

[LouBez]

http://soundcloud.com/lou-bez-aka-florida-keyz/blood-on-biscayne-bay

 

[DJ Excellence]

Loubez: Good work. The drums are massive; feeling the strings.

Gustto1: nice melancholic beat. The main melody is way behind the drums, turn it up a bit.

aBeatBaker: nice bass and stabs. You need to work on the mix a bit : lower the bass, and bring up the vocals. Otherwise: solid wok.