Breathe

Ys Man

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 21
As a fellow englishman i think "Breave" would be a better title, sometimes you stumble over your words a bit just cause i dont think they match your accent and your edging to using an american accent, mixing out some nasal and adding more low grit to the vocal would help and bringing up the backing vocals for the hook to make it bigger, at the minute its got a goldie looking chain vibe and i think your aiming for more serious.
 

wali_raw

Beatmaker
Battle Points: 26
Feeling this beat. Got that dark grimey feel to it. That stank face on right now. Keep at it.


Btw check out my beat and would love feedbacks, thanks.

 
Dope beat, good to hear ya spit on it too.
Nothing to add from previous comments, just keep working on your flow.
Keep it up, look forward to more.

Love the ‘Breathe’ concept.

“They think I’m Weak coz I’m Kind” : Feel that shit!
 
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