Breathe

[Hypermanbeatz]

This is a track I'm working on atm need to record second verse still

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[Leopard Cohen]

I like it. The breakdown and buildup around the 2 min mark hits hard.

 

[Hypermanbeatz]

Thanks bro

 

[Dusty B]

I think there's opportunity to make some of the annunciation sound cleaner and more natural, it sounds forced when you're rhyming and sometimes inconsistent/unnatural to the ear (the "I in team" line comes to mind).

 

[Hypermanbeatz]

I think there's opportunity to make some of the annunciation sound cleaner and more natural, it sounds forced when you're rhyming and sometimes inconsistent/unnatural to the ear (the "I in team" line comes to mind).

Appreciate the feedback man

 

[Ys Man]

As a fellow englishman i think "Breave" would be a better title, sometimes you stumble over your words a bit just cause i dont think they match your accent and your edging to using an american accent, mixing out some nasal and adding more low grit to the vocal would help and bringing up the backing vocals for the hook to make it bigger, at the minute its got a goldie looking chain vibe and i think your aiming for more serious.

 

[Kane the MOD]

Another producer/rapper. I like it. I think the hook is dope. Personally, I would put more emphasis on the rhyming words during the verses.

 

[Delta_Nine]

Glad to see some more spitters around here. I like this, bruv. The break down could use some dialog imo, but it's up to you ofc. Hell yeah, post some more joints when you can. Salute .

 

[wali_raw]

Feeling this beat. Got that dark grimey feel to it. That stank face on right now. Keep at it.


Btw check out my beat and would love feedbacks, thanks.

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[InsideOutBeats]

Dope beat, good to hear ya spit on it too.
Nothing to add from previous comments, just keep working on your flow.
Keep it up, look forward to more.

Love the ‘Breathe’ concept.

“They think I’m Weak coz I’m Kind” : Feel that shit!

 

[skarjord]

*Thumbs up*

 

[VVS]

@Hypermanbeatz Do you have reverb applied to all your beats? lol