Showcase - July 30-August 5, 2018

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crosstevsky

beats architect
Battle Points: 33
Let me know how I could improve this track, It's the first time I've tried to really make a beat from sampling. I've sampled before but it was mostly for EDM type tracks and mostly stuff like Rick and Morty and what not. Also I apologize if the track doesn't show up, I've never really shared my SC on the internet.

It sounds good, I think you have too much water in your beat:D. Try to add some butter (bassline) to glue it together.
 

crosstevsky

beats architect
Battle Points: 33
Let me know how I could improve this track, It's the first time I've tried to really make a beat from sampling. I've sampled before but it was mostly for EDM type tracks and mostly stuff like Rick and Morty and what not. Also I apologize if the track doesn't show up, I've never really shared my SC on the internet.

It sounds good, I think you have too much water in your beat:D. Try to add some butter (bassline) to glue it together.
@Dzhi Beats very intoxicating beat love how it builds. Nice work sir!!
@NONONSENSEBEATS at first I was gonna say I didn't like the sample but it grew on me the more I let it play. Wasn't crazy about the kick drum though, but overall this a good beat.
@DEEZ BEATZ That beat got me hyped!! Dopeness!!
@Copyno Nice, I would like to hear Chamillionaire over this beat.
@crosstevsky Love the good vibes from this beat! One of those beats that if an artist writes fire to it could be a song that sticks with you years later. Good Work!!!
Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you like it.
 

DEEZ BEATZ

THE GOLD STANDARD...
Moderator
Battle Points: 902
It sounds good, I think you have too much water in your beat:D. Try to add some butter (bassline) to glue it together.
This beat definitely needs a nice bassline just as @crosstevsky pointed out...but has potential
 

C4NTK33P5T1LL

Paying My Dues With I O U's
Battle Points: 82
@Matt-D I Listened To Signature Expression I Wasn't That In To It TBH Sounded A Bit Out Of Tune-ish n Messy On The Inst/Samp You've Used Wern't Really Feeling It Till 1:22 Enjoyed That Change Up Though & The Rev Cymbal Loop Came Out A Bit Intrusive On My End
If I Have Come Off Like A Twat Sorry Just Wasn't My Cup O Tea
@Dzhi Beats Liked The Deep 808 Bassy Stuff , The Snare/Clap Hit Spot On Quite Liked The Vocal Shots Too & The Lead Isn't What Ya Usually Hear On A Chillish Track But I Reckon You've Made It Work. Found The Phased Stuff Later On A Bit Much( That's Just Me Being Picky) But The Vinyl Stop Bit Was A Nice Touch Toward The End Cool Track
@NONONSENSEBEATS I Really Liked This Was Very Cool Liked The Intro Really Liked The Low Keys The Strings Were Fucking Spot On The Drums Stepped Up Really Nice As The Track Gathered Some Pace
Not A Bad Word To Say About This It's A Proper Shit-Hot!!!!!! Track Pal
Nice One
@DEEZ BEATZ Yes Another One I Really Liked Very Hyped N Pumped Feel I Got Of This Very Hood & Gangsta Also Got A Robotic Sort Of Daft Punkish Sort Of Groove Which I Liked Cos Man Loves Daft Punk The Ayyyooo Vocals Are A Really Nice Touch As Is The Drum Solo At 2:02 Cos It Sets It Up Nice For The Finish Awesome Beat Proper Enjoyed It
@Copyno Tight Track At First I Thought This Was Gonna A Bit Too Trancey On The Lead But It Defo Works Can't Really Poke Any Holes In It Liked The Drums Got A Buzz Off That Trappy Brass Grunt Coming In & Ya Kept Me Waiting For It Too Hit Again Spot On Beat Pal
@DawnEHboy
Dude That Noise I'm Not Sure If It's Meant To Be In It As Loud As It Is Not Sure If Its On The String Sample You Used But I Can Hear The Ocean Or The (Not So) Calm Coastal Air & It Ruined This Track For Me, I've Done & Still Do This Myself On Stuff I've Sampled & I Learned If Ya Cant Clean The Shite Frequencies Out It's Probably Not Worth Using At All But If Ya Put It In Intentional I'd Deffo Lower & Q It A Bit, Thing Is I Really Liked The Melody On The Strings It Was Propa Good
@crosstevsky Nice This Is Proper Feel Good Could Defo Hear This On A Film Or Summit Like That Thought The Guitar Was Really Good & Very Original For A Hip-Hop (ish) Beat Nice Job Mate

So I Think That's All
I Shall Now Leave By Chucking Out A Riddle
The More You Take The More You Leave Behind
Hmmmmm ????????
 

crosstevsky

beats architect
Battle Points: 33
I Made This A Few Weeks Back , Sounds A Bit Too "Cartoony" To Me But Maybe I'm Wrong Feedback Will Commence On Prior Beats Upon This Being Posted
Nice sounds on this, i like the brass thing, and scratch samples, but it sounds to busy to me with the drums, try and throw something out, or try some simpler scratch pattern. Overall groove and timing could be better.
 

DawnEHboy

Fair-weather Nihilist
Battle Points: 1
@DawnEHboy
Dude That Noise I'm Not Sure If It's Meant To Be In It As Loud As It Is Not Sure If Its On The String Sample You Used But I Can Hear The Ocean Or The (Not So) Calm Coastal Air & It Ruined This Track For Me, I've Done & Still Do This Myself On Stuff I've Sampled & I Learned If Ya Cant Clean The Shite Frequencies Out It's Probably Not Worth Using At All But If Ya Put It In Intentional I'd Deffo Lower & Q It A Bit, Thing Is I Really Liked The Melody On The Strings It Was Propa Good
The sample from the Sopranos is when they're talking in a car and you can hear the traffic in he background. I wasn't sure how to transition properly without a complete drop out when the beat hit so I sampled it in as an ambient background noise. I guess it was too much haha. If you've got any suggestions I'm always open to hear em.
 

44Beatzz

Ruhrpott / Germany
Battle Points: 102
@Matt-D I like the vocals and the mood of "remember tonight" But i dont like the filtering.Its too much for my opinion.
"Signature expression" is dope.The drums,atmosphere and brass is very good.
@Dzhi Beats I feel this track! I like the vocals and the overall dreamy mood.Good work!

Its very warm outside in germany right now.I live under the roof and its even hotter..
This is what happens then..

 

C4NTK33P5T1LL

Paying My Dues With I O U's
Battle Points: 82
The sample from the Sopranos is when they're talking in a car and you can hear the traffic in he background. I wasn't sure how to transition properly without a complete drop out when the beat hit so I sampled it in as an ambient background noise. I guess it was too much haha. If you've got any suggestions I'm always open to hear em.
Like I Ses The Music In The Sample Is A Great Tune Its The Traffic Noise You Defo Got a Good Ear For Picking Out A Melody I Have Ripped A Few T.V. Film Scores & 1st Thing I'd Try Before Anything Is To See If You Can Find Out The Source Of It Find Out Who Made The Music In The First Place & See If There Is A Cleaner Version Of It Somewhere Else 90% Of The Time There Is Some Info On A Youtube Vid Description.If You Wanna Clean It I'd Just Experiment With High Pass Low Pass De-Essers Etc I Usually Split The Sample Into 3 Or 4 Different Tracks Eg LOWS MIDs HIGH-MiDS & HIGHS & From There You Get A Lot More Control Over The Whole Sound Still Have To EQ & COMP The Various Parts A Few Times There Are A Few Plug-ins That Are Half Decent For Extraction One I've Used For This Before Is Accusonus
 

NONONSENSEBEATS

NononsenseBeats
Moderator
Battle Points: 205
@crosstevsky I like it...that some good vibes shit right there. Nice work.

@DawnEHboy I like this beat but its missing a key element tho. Put that in and this will be dope Good skeleton tho. Nice work.

@C4NTK33P5T1LL I kinda dig this. It is a bit busy and the timing is a bit off but I like the switch up. Good work just fix a few minor things.

Thanks for the feedback y'all. Hopefully I didn't forget anybody.
 

dBtheProducer

Autism Dad, I Use FL Studio
Battle Points: 89
sup everybody, warm day in Virginia, im at work bored asf and got a beat to share with yall but first, lets check out all you guys beats!


@Matt-D first beat im feeling the direction you were going for until it started getting offset, I suspect that was your intention and its cool but it doesn't compliment the beat well, I found myself cutting the beat short because of it...like the work done in the hook very psychedelic and surreal sounding...overall not bad but not my favorite that ive heard from ya

2nd beat, I already like this 1000 times better than the first, nice sample choice cant go wrong with a soul record...im a stickler for timing and the timing to this beat and drums are a little off but besides that like I said I like this one way more than your first beat...good job keep it up bro

@Dzhi Beats not bad...this beat has a lot of soft sounds with hard hitting drums, they contrast very well...very unique and creative approach to everything, I like this beat for the fact it doesn't remind me of any record that's out now even if you are using 808's...which isn't really easy to do so very nice work man on your originality...

@NONONSENSEBEATS whats good nonsense, this sounds like a serious ass slim mshady type beat...Kendrick could be heard on something like this as well...its a simple approach but the simpleness of the beat is what I like the most...it leaves room for a lyrical artist to just go off...nice work man im diggining this beat

@DEEZ BEATZ sup bro I always leave feedback on your joints, always, ive never skipped or ignored ya...and I always look forward to getting your feedback specifically...this beat is fire and it sounds like you were just having fun with it so im enjoying this beat frfr… I aim to be as good as you are in EQ'ing beats cuz your shit always sounds professional...good job og

@Copyno hey nice to meet ya, holy fucking shit...way to make a first impression homie this is beynd fire, this is scorching hot on the surface of the sun dope lol...clean mixing and this track is fucking dope idk what to say this sound like fabulous and jadakiss need to fucking kill this shit...reminds me of some Kenny buttonz type shit amazing beat man!

@crosstevsky pleasantly surprised by this beat from you man...this is probably my favorite beat of yours that I have heard so far, the piano keys and hip hop drums are a classic combo...this was done nicely...would've mixed it more on the lofi spectrum but this is a simple enough beat to maybe have a freestyle session to, got a good vibe and its catchy nice work man

@DawnEHboy whats good nice to meet ya, first that sample comes in real loud made my ears bleed lol...loving the soprano vocals/vibe to this whole beat...I like the beat just the way it is my only comment is it could've improved a little bit more if you got the swing timing down just right...not in love with the bassline but atleast it isn't so loud where you cant hear anything else...I love this beat man makes me want to go find that sample and make something to it too lol...

@crosstevsky I feel like I know what you were trying to achieve in this beat my only coment is maybe theres a bit too much going on...and the timing to the scratches don't always line up with the drums...it takes away from everything else...bassline is cool but it doesn't compliment the beat any...not the worst beat ive heard from you and I think this has potential to be a dope beat just needs a little more time and attention is all..there are sections and pieces to this beat I think are fucking dope and then there are other parts where the timing issue makes it a little vexacious

@44Beatzz so heres the deal, not in love with the beat, but that video was too funny...the beat reminded me of some old Nintendo karate kid type shit...meaning it sounds more like avideo game parody track as oppose to a instrumental meant for vocals...and theres nothing wrong with that I think this would be dope in a video game or an app and keep it up cant wait to hear more music from ya

@Joey Phillips nice to meet ya, this beat is fucking lit...im digging all the sounds you used and the effects on them...bass is dope and I like all the drops...fire beat if your into trap...nice work man!

@NONONSENSEBEATS wow...amazing work on this banger man...this is some fire my dude I like all the changeups and that instrument you used for the melody sounds dope with all the 808s in this...crazy beat man nice work


ok so here is my beat, enjoy!

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DEEZ BEATZ

THE GOLD STANDARD...
Moderator
Battle Points: 902
sup everybody, warm day in Virginia, im at work bored asf and got a beat to share with yall but first, lets check out all you guys beats!


@Matt-D first beat im feeling the direction you were going for until it started getting offset, I suspect that was your intention and its cool but it doesn't compliment the beat well, I found myself cutting the beat short because of it...like the work done in the hook very psychedelic and surreal sounding...overall not bad but not my favorite that ive heard from ya

2nd beat, I already like this 1000 times better than the first, nice sample choice cant go wrong with a soul record...im a stickler for timing and the timing to this beat and drums are a little off but besides that like I said I like this one way more than your first beat...good job keep it up bro

@Dzhi Beats not bad...this beat has a lot of soft sounds with hard hitting drums, they contrast very well...very unique and creative approach to everything, I like this beat for the fact it doesn't remind me of any record that's out now even if you are using 808's...which isn't really easy to do so very nice work man on your originality...

@NONONSENSEBEATS whats good nonsense, this sounds like a serious ass slim mshady type beat...Kendrick could be heard on something like this as well...its a simple approach but the simpleness of the beat is what I like the most...it leaves room for a lyrical artist to just go off...nice work man im diggining this beat

@DEEZ BEATZ sup bro I always leave feedback on your joints, always, ive never skipped or ignored ya...and I always look forward to getting your feedback specifically...this beat is fire and it sounds like you were just having fun with it so im enjoying this beat frfr… I aim to be as good as you are in EQ'ing beats cuz your shit always sounds professional...good job og

@Copyno hey nice to meet ya, holy fucking shit...way to make a first impression homie this is beynd fire, this is scorching hot on the surface of the sun dope lol...clean mixing and this track is fucking dope idk what to say this sound like fabulous and jadakiss need to fucking kill this shit...reminds me of some Kenny buttonz type shit amazing beat man!

@crosstevsky pleasantly surprised by this beat from you man...this is probably my favorite beat of yours that I have heard so far, the piano keys and hip hop drums are a classic combo...this was done nicely...would've mixed it more on the lofi spectrum but this is a simple enough beat to maybe have a freestyle session to, got a good vibe and its catchy nice work man

@DawnEHboy whats good nice to meet ya, first that sample comes in real loud made my ears bleed lol...loving the soprano vocals/vibe to this whole beat...I like the beat just the way it is my only comment is it could've improved a little bit more if you got the swing timing down just right...not in love with the bassline but atleast it isn't so loud where you cant hear anything else...I love this beat man makes me want to go find that sample and make something to it too lol...

@crosstevsky I feel like I know what you were trying to achieve in this beat my only coment is maybe theres a bit too much going on...and the timing to the scratches don't always line up with the drums...it takes away from everything else...bassline is cool but it doesn't compliment the beat any...not the worst beat ive heard from you and I think this has potential to be a dope beat just needs a little more time and attention is all..there are sections and pieces to this beat I think are fucking dope and then there are other parts where the timing issue makes it a little vexacious

@44Beatzz so heres the deal, not in love with the beat, but that video was too funny...the beat reminded me of some old Nintendo karate kid type shit...meaning it sounds more like avideo game parody track as oppose to a instrumental meant for vocals...and theres nothing wrong with that I think this would be dope in a video game or an app and keep it up cant wait to hear more music from ya

@Joey Phillips nice to meet ya, this beat is fucking lit...im digging all the sounds you used and the effects on them...bass is dope and I like all the drops...fire beat if your into trap...nice work man!

@NONONSENSEBEATS wow...amazing work on this banger man...this is some fire my dude I like all the changeups and that instrument you used for the melody sounds dope with all the 808s in this...crazy beat man nice work


ok so here is my beat, enjoy!

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@dBtheProducer , hey thanks bruh. i usually try my damnest to acknowledge your beats and give feedback also...the secret to my sound is panning and using a 36 track mixing board to have that seperation...i tell anyone who will listen that seperation is the key to good quality sounding music...cause i want people to hear every instrument i use in my beats..
 

DEEZ BEATZ

THE GOLD STANDARD...
Moderator
Battle Points: 902
@dBtheProducer , this beat is dope af bruh...the only thing is that your sample is a little over bearing i like it a lot it really juices up the beat but you need seperation with those drum beats...like spread out the snares and kick drum and the crash cymbal..they each should have their own track...and panned left to right, all percussions should be panned..except kick drums and 808 bass or basslines.. but really like it i listened to it 3 times already
 

crosstevsky

beats architect
Battle Points: 33
@dBtheProducer Thanks for the props man, I'm still working on that beat, so you gave me an idea to try and mix it more lo-fi...Your beat is dope, nice blend of electric guitars and hip hop, drums could hit a little harder.On the mixing side, I feel like all your mixes that I've heard from you are a little too bright and piercing in the high frequencies.Maybe it's just me idk.
 

Matt-D

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 72
@C4NTK33P5T1LL I like the idea behind the beat but it's just a bit too much for me. The sample was good but it seems kind of forced to me, mainly the drums.
@44Beatzz Nothing bad to say, this is a fun beat and is mixed very well. I was rolling on the Chris Tucker and Steph Curry Dance Moves.
@NONONSENSEBEATS well constructed beat but it was boring to listen to imo, and it didn't really catch my attention. Not my favorite from you.
@dBtheProducer That's what i'm talking about!! Straight Fire!! Love that bass and the overall balance of the beat. Well Done!

I hope I'm not forgetting anyone on feedback I will re-check tomorrow. Peace
 
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