I have created another beat. It's an Ice Cube's "You know how we do it" sample. Any usefull critiques would be very helpfull
Much better than your last beat, I can hear a little clicking on one of your chops, its the second chop of the loop you have put together, it repeats four times in the loop. Its very minor.
As stated the mix could use a little work but I wouldn't worry too much about mixing right now, just stick with the basics of EQ/filtering, panning and some reverb and delay.
Use panning to get a sound and a counter sound to play off of each other, like a question and answer. Its a great way to start playing around with the stereo field, and putting things to the left and to the right. With this beat I think the first sound that comes in(I think its been chopped hence the little click on the second one) and the electric piano can play off of each other, Id pan the electric piano to the right a little as the first sound is already slightly left and the two would play off of each other nicely. Personally I usually pan my hi hat to the left, shakers to the right and get them playing off of each other too. Put a little reverb on your hats and snares too, it really helps them pop, room reverb works best with a short tail on it. But these are just guidelines. Nice work.