The Real SlimSpaceship
Battle Points: 4
yeah that a good idea! i might make an "acoustic" version of it or something when i get round to it, hard to tear myself away from my current project haha@Marc Duncan This can be synced on a commercial about some kids products... I don't hear rapper on top of it...the production seems in place...those 808's can be softer like from 0:41 and on...thats it, nothing else wrong with it...just the general vibe is not my kind of thing...
@Crispifier This is nice, dreamy and melancholic...i don't feel it as a hip hop beat, more like music on its own...you can go in that direction with it... softer snare drum, or no drum track at all, just some softer percussion...nice piano work ....I can't play the second one, i don't know what's wrong?
@Dzhi Beats On this I like all the harmony and melody sounds...i think you can simplify the drum track i think is overcrowded, with all the little snares, hi hats...I think a more straightforward beat will suit this better. And you can rework the bassline...it doesn't fit well IMO.
@2GooD Productions She got ya head turning...nice classic sound buddy, everything is good, i don't know what to tell you maybe if you can make that bassline more "defined" and "jump up more"...also i approve that brass, that is good brass / On Mr Boombox I think the bass is alit bit too heavy on this, other than that, i dont know what to tell you, you're on fire...you have been working hard this week
@Memento Beats This is dope thing that you did with @itzSAYKRIDD It sounds like Big Berd's vocals are recorded with lower quality but i guess nothing you can do about that...overall good...
I have some weird ones for you this week...
Love Gypsy Valley, that one is sick ! sounds very eastern or even a little bit fantasy but maybe thats just my inner nerd showing warranted a second listen!
not as much a fan of Trap on Acid but i think thats just down to personal taste tbh as im originally a rock/indie musician who likes old school hip hop. So i still have to get my head around the whole trap genre when its this intense
as previously stated to others Im very hesitant to comment on the producing side of things since i'm very much a beginner, but it sounds clean to my ears !
Thank you for your feedback ^^