Yo man I like your beat, you gotta keep on making beats every day if possible. My suggestion is that you have to focus more on mixing, it's a pain in the rear but when you do it well plus Mastering the beat I will be Dope, I spent a lot of time in that and still gotta improve, check out my mixingNew track here, learning as always;
Feedback & support appreciated [and returned where warranted]..
Thanks for checking it out,
*Checking out previous beats to provide feedback now.