Showcase - October 1-7, 2018

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Y-DOLEM

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Battle Points: 7
@RizzakBeats for me that a very chilled beat man the melody and the base guitar so calm everything on point for a story to be told and damn the strings on the back ground on that switch the variation is perfect.
@dBtheProducer the aggressiveness is dope and the base with the drums i can just keep on listening to this for more than one times

@Kod4R Nice one man the i like the way this sounds, relaxing though the vocals on sample are not that clear as much as it written that its say, its just a bit distorted or something.

@PlatinumBeats Dope beat bro. i like it the keys and the hardness of the kick makes me wanna hear more and more of this .
@Matt-D nice Remix man, but i feel like its a bit quiet would have love to here more of them drums on it and make it more of an instrumental beat rather than that flanger sound because its making it sound more electrical but overall nice selection on the MJ song #RESPECT.
@csbr i'm intuned with the intro man..too much fire on those Drums. that background sound im not sure what they are man but i feel you can turn them down a bit as they are a bit loud. great work bru,
@JTMONEY Dope Bassline and everything man, sound is so clean the break got me Meditating no LIE.
@crosstevsky Very interesting sound, the Synth Pad really brings out the color of the beat and everything nice work
@C4NTK33P5T1LL Great Beat bro, clean and hard sounds and evrything i like it.
 

Y-DOLEM

Newbie
Battle Points: 7
Did this one sometime ago, seeking for some reviews before i lace something with it. Groovy Soul
 

crosstevsky

beats architect
Battle Points: 33
Thank you for your feedback gentlemen...

@Matt-D
Man if I were you I would start this remix again.
I think is too busy and I suggest using different sounds
maybe something more organic or soulful idk. Try to
find the key from the song...and make the beat according to it
Like this, it sounds like two different songs playing together, it's just chaotic
The idea of remixing MJ is the only thing I like about this.

@PlatinumBeats
Nice Remake of RHCP, although I'm not too fond of the idea, I just don't see the purpose...Why?That layer of clap and tambourine
sounds ok. Other drum sounds are ok. I think you should tweak the strings and piano(high melody part) a little bit more,
they sound kind of "stocky" to me :)

@dBtheProducer
Yoo this is dope...Mix is nic..
just kidding, but really it is dope. I've enjoyed it, played it a couple of times. Both loops are pretty slick and hooky..I Like the violin on the second one
and the bass scale down thing in the first. There is some mud in the 100-400 Hz. You can fix that, although if the bass is a sample it could be tricky.
That's on my headphones, on the phone though it has a little harshness, 5k or so...With people listening through their phones nowadays you could consider checking it on the phone.
Well put together beat. Man...I even did a little dance on this groovy shit.

@RizzakBeats
This is smooth, I like it how you develop this, piano and strings sound nice. Maybe the bass volume can be automated, sounds loud on less busy sections.
I think busier hi-hat pattern will bring the energy up on some sections. The mix sounds flawless to me. Nice one bro...

@Y-DOLEM Thanks for the feedback...I think You've uploaded it your beat the wrong way...There is an upload button on your profile page.
 

Matt-D

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 72
thanks big time for the honest feedback, yeah i was half sleep when i made this, so i knew i messed up shortly after i posted it and played it back LOL. Its key is off cause i tried fine tuning it instead of leaving it the way i played it which was a huge mistake. Re-working it now and readjusting sounds and its really sounding a lot cleaner and better. Will post detailed feedback after i get off work, and good lookin out.
 

crosstevsky

beats architect
Battle Points: 33
thanks big time for the honest feedback, yeah i was half sleep when i made this, so i knew i messed up shortly after i posted it and played it back LOL. Its key is off cause i tried fine tuning it instead of leaving it the way i played it which was a huge mistake. Re-working it now and readjusting sounds and its really sounding a lot cleaner and better. Will post detailed feedback after i get off work, and good lookin out.
Sure bro, that's why we're here, to give you a wake up call :D If it matters, I feel that I make better beats in the morning, I guess sleep does affect all aspects of our life, making music included...
 

Kod4R

Beatmaker
Battle Points: 19
@dBtheProducer haha.. im not joining the old school train bro, im already there :p haha.. i never liked the trap, but there are some songs with great beats & lyrics.. now on the topic, your beat, the sample is so good, i like how you chopped it and how you made the rhytm.. great job! keep it up!
@RizzakBeats that's dope beat bro, i just think that the bass and the sample are a bit separated, if you know what i mean.. but keep it up!

aand.. thanks everyone on the feedback, i will try to give more feedback when more beats are posted!
Peace! 1L
 

producervibes

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 46
@C4NTK33P5T1LL very hard beat! It bothers me a little that your choir is sometimes offbeat. But your baseline is sooo evil (in a good way)!

@crosstevsky also a dark beat, i like it! It's interesting that you go an octave down with your staccato in the second part. In my opinion your Synth Pad in the hook has to bright high frequencies, it swells out from the well fitting background to the front and is too present (but just in the second hook, because you play it an octave or two higher I guess)

@JTMONEY Your Beat has a very nice drum programming! It is also a kinda dark beat. Your Kick and your 808 baseline are kicking very good! But for my taste, I would take a little bit of the reverb out of the drums. It gives me the feeling that I'm in a very large empty hall. But what also would work is when you take the high frequencies with a high shelf filter for 3-5 dB down, so the hihats don't hiss to much. Still nice beat!

@csbr the title of the beat fits perfectly to the mood of your beat. I like your drums, they sound like hard, but not harsh and kinda feel very comfortable to listen to, a good mix. Like your arrangement & the phaser or modulator you put on your instrument which is playing the main theme. Nothing to complain about.

@Matt-D I like to listen to your stuff, you do interesting remixes and you improve more and more, that's why I like your stuff. For me the Kick is way to flat, this song deserved some more punch in the kick section! The chord progression is very nice, but in the hook, there is a chord which is bugging me. It bites with the tone mj is singing. Where he sings "you really TURN ME on", there is a chord which doesn't fit so well for me. Also mj is getting a little bit in the background when all of your instruments are playing. In the mix you could give his voice a little more space by taking away the frequencies on the instruments where his voice is located, I would guess around 1,5 kHz to 4 kHz. But I like what you made!

@PlatinumBeats In the beginning (I guess it's the hook) it sounds unnatural that the strings are playing the same rhythm like the piano, you could get a more interesting sound by giving the strings a different rhythm, maybe just a pad playing the root notes of the chords. I kinda have the feeling that your 808 baseline has not the same tune like the first chord of your loop, sounds somehow too deep. Your kick and 808 hit hard, like that!

@Copyno nice beat! Would love to hear someone rap over it! A lot of switch ups and your brass sounds very hard, love that! Nothing to complain.

@Kod4R I like your beat, very great arrangement! One thing that I felt was not so tight is the starting point of your sample with the voice, I guess it's the hook sample. I guess it's starting to early or plays to fast, before it sings aaaaaaaaah it seems out of sync. But the rest is very nice!

@dBtheProducer Great sample flip, the chops of your sample are very clean and made my head bump. The switch up with the strings is just perfect! Your baseline has a little to much mids in my opinion, would be nice if it would be more cutoff'd and your kick a little bit punchier. It would be awesome in my opinion! Great work though!!


Here's my beat. Let me know what I can improve!
I can listen this beat when workin' for hours. It's so calm and smooth. Bass line is also really dope. Perfect chill lounge beat
 

The Thrillz

www.thethrillz.com
@producervibes Dope work bro! I like the bells they sounds really nice. The mix is pretty solid and well balanced.

@RizzakBeats The beats is straight fire! The sound selection is on point and I really like ambience. Only thing I would add is some more percussion in the background. Keep up with the good work!

@csbr You killed this one bro. It sounds mad dope! Those drums are crazy and the 808 goes hard af! Keep em coming!
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producervibes

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 46
@producervibes Dope work bro! I like the bells they sounds really nice. The mix is pretty solid and well balanced.

@RizzakBeats The beats is straight fire! The sound selection is on point and I really like ambience. Only thing I would add is some more percussion in the background. Keep up with the good work!

@csbr You killed this one bro. It sounds mad dope! Those drums are crazy and the 808 goes hard af! Keep em coming!
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What can I can....very professional high-quality beat. The mix is just excellent.
 

crosstevsky

beats architect
Battle Points: 33
@Y-DOLEM I like the drum work on this, sounds pretty funky and original, nice sample chops. That bass coming in on 0:20 sounds out of tune, you can tweak it. Sounds like you panned a couple of the instruments on the right, so it does sound little unbalanced on my headphones...Overall, pretty good.
 
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