Showcase - May 18-24, 2020

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crosstevsky

beats architect
Battle Points: 127
I forgot Id even done this, just found it. That sample you sent me, this is what happened with it.

Nothing here yet.
yeah...you did some good with it...i like how you've composed those chord changes over the sample...very good, i think some softer snare sound or side stick will suit this better, i'm stopping this at 0:45...you already know that i'm not fan of your brass sounds... :)
 
yeah...you did some good with it...i like how you've composed those chord changes over the sample...very good, i think some softer snare sound or side stick will suit this better, i'm stopping this at 0:45...you already know that i'm not fan of your brass sounds... :)
lmfao, come on man, they were tastefully done no?
 

Iron Keys

ILLIEN MBAPPÉ
ill o.g.
Battle Points: 544
@Matt-D
nice n chill vibey. I can hear a uk artist on that

@Muszolini
nice I can hear some gritty NY bredda going dark on this one. Or some Xzibit type. Some growly ass rapper. put fear in 'em

@Marc Duncan
nice. for the ladies. I can hear a female r&b singer on this. love the clave, been wanting to put one in a beat but can't find a decent sample

@Dzhi Beats
nice one.floaty dream vibes. can hear some emotional vibes on this. meaningful stuff. poignant.

@KongoRampoozy
this got a kinda off the beaten path type vibe, interesting ish. nice

@TRIPLE EIGHT
be the one. really love the musicality n sounds in this one.
Fire this one cool too, cool sound selections

@WIKTO-GRIZZLY
nice music, love the video too
 

Iron Keys

ILLIEN MBAPPÉ
ill o.g.
Battle Points: 544
@Khaly Beatz
really nice haunted vibes

@DiezeALAPROD
i can hear like some old school voice with a new school flow on this. nice

@44Beatzz
cool stuff, I can hear Fat Joe or Rick Ross on this. whole host of rappers could shred this


@Digitali Musix
cool stuff, really experimental style. kinda fits in while doing ya own thing.

@KongoRampoozy
give me. kinda kanye style with this sample use. feelin it

@OMAR.
nice classic vibe. kung fu samples always sit wlel with me haha

@crosstevsky
nice, track kinda takes me on a lil excursion. off somewhere doing a thing

@2GooD Productions
huckleberry. that's some wild ish. lots of bounce and wild things slapping ya

@drenbeats
really cool piano and vocal vibes. gonna need to break into your yard and steal your reverb settings.
 

Crispifier

The Real SlimSpaceship
Battle Points: 15
Hello everyone!
I hope you are doing well!
This is my new melodic beat with a guitar.
In the end, I started writing a little text on this beat.
Peace for everyone!


wow that guitarplaying is amazing ! I play myself but nowhere near that level. such a sick beat hope i can make something like this one day ! :O
 

Crispifier

The Real SlimSpaceship
Battle Points: 15
Ok well shit here i go first time posting! Im really new to making anything with fl studio so any constructive criticism is welcome I listened to some of the things on this page and a lot of you guys are insane at this stuff, so here we go :O

 

KongoRampoozy

Member
Battle Points: 6
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Something I put together tonight, mainly did it off the back of the break that I found, not much effort went into mixing it some apologies if it sounds a little harsh!
 
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Something I put together tonight, mainly did it off the back of the break that I found, not much effort went into mixing it some apologies if it sounds a little harsh!
i think there is slightly too much going on with the drum rolls, could trim that back a bit, i think if the rolls were a lot less frequent they would be a more sublte way to make things less repetitive, i think the way they are adds to the repetitiveness instead of taking from it, thats my only criticism really.
 
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Something I put together tonight, mainly did it off the back of the break that I found, not much effort went into mixing it some apologies if it sounds a little harsh!
I really like melody, but i think drums are a bit complicated, drum rolls are too present for me, but good sound selection
And you can keep this pattern for the climax of the beat i think
 
Ok well shit here i go first time posting! Im really new to making anything with fl studio so any constructive criticism is welcome I listened to some of the things on this page and a lot of you guys are insane at this stuff, so here we go :O


for some reason this reminds me of orinoko flow


or ready or not by the fugees, maybe its the chord progression. Nice chill beat, well put together. I like the composition.
 

Crispifier

The Real SlimSpaceship
Battle Points: 15
Heres some battle aftermath music, something I cooked up today.


That is so epic! i dont have anything to offer in terms of criticism cuz you're way out of my league haha, can imagine this being played in some gritty fantasy thriller when the hero is getting shit done :) Thank you for the kind feedback btw. I think its the arpeggios man! hahah since were doing this your song kinda reminds me a little of one of my favorite composers with more of a beat im a total weeb btw
 
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